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Draxonos135


Hello everyone, Draxonos135 here. I mostly focus on Equestria Girls fanfics, and the one thing I like to do most is bring some kind of positive emotion to my readers.

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Adagio Dazzle was short on money, so she decided, with some budging from her fellow sirens, to take up a babysitting job.

She wasn't enthusiastic about it at first, but something happens that changes her mind: the girl she's babysitting seems to be upset about something...

Something that could threaten to split the Canterlot Movie Club apart, and introduce the Dazzlings to a bigger picture.

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One of the better AaM consequences fics I have seen. Good job. If you don't mind I'll promote this on my blog.

i have not read this and i probably never will but babysitter+Crusader/s=insanity. and laughs. at least for the audience. probably alot of screaming in terror/at the mindbreakingness of the insanity on Adagio's part.

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I don't mind in the slightest, I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

I'm guessing this is before the BotB?

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Battle of the bands, right? I believe Anon-A-Miss happens after Rainbow Rocks, and thus after the battle of the bands, so it takes place after.

When I clicked on this story I thought it would be something like the movie Adventures in babysitting

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Ah. In that case, shouldn’t Rarity and Sweetie Belle RECOGNIZE Adagio? I can understand if Rarity is too angry to care that a former enemy is babysitting her sister, but what about Sweetie Belle?

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She was around when the Sirens had their gig?

Well, how about both of them are too angry and said respectively to recognize her?

This improvement needs an improvement.

Who exactly thought this? Sweetie Belle or Rarity? In my eyes its somewhat a dark-ish statement considering the situation.

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Rarity, who's talking about the fact Sweetie Belle may need to spend some more time recovering from Anon-A-Miss.

I've only read a couple of Anon-a-Miss stories, so most of what I know of them is from rumour and summaries. I know the Dazzlings are often brought in on Sunset's side, and I did wonder about mentioning the idea of them backing up the CMCs in the group prompt. But having them meet afterwards, when there's still fallout, that's an interesting one and not one I'd have thought of.

I spotted a couple of hanging sentences, by the way, where it looks like the end got chopped off:

Huh, sounds like there's some family drama going on in this house. Better add that to my reasons for not to

And as Sweetie Belle fell silent

And then there was a scene that started like this:

Adagio, now sitting on a chair with a cup of tea

Personally, I'm not too fussed about the chair. But those two other elements give this all the makings of a perfect thing :pinkiehappy:

Anyway, this was a great idea for a story, and I thought it handled the chemistry between the two lead characters well. I'm not quite sure why Adagio was that scared of Rarity, but neither was she. I'm intrigued by Adagio's suggestion of abandoning friends who get you into trouble, since she's the one who does most of the work among the Dazzlings.

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Possible sequel hook? XD

Regardless, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I hope we have more fun with this month's prompt :)

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Well, she WAS one of those who fell under their spell. I remember seeing them in the movie in the cafeteria and then arguing about who’s going to win the Battle. Anyway, thanks.

Rainbow Rocks would've been much shorter if they knew about Adagio's secret weakness.... Lampposts (dramatic music)

Great story.
A possible sequel?

"It's... it's... it's something I... and my friends did..."

Damn, another stealth Anon-a-Miss story. I keep running into these.

OOOH, AB AND SCOOTS JUST GOT BURNED!

Somebody call the fire brigade.

I like it.

I am not very happy with the whole "Anon-A-Miss" gossip spreading story stuff. We saw that in canon, with the school paper, and the three of them learned quickly that this was a bad idea.

And instead, that story was just the same thing to an extreme, with massive (if not at least partially realistic) fallout.

Here? We have someone looking at what happened, and actually looking at "What do I want in the future?".

Knowing "Harmony" and such, I think a more canon response would be for Sweetie to, now that she realizes how wrong that was, to convince her friends of this so that all of them behave better in the future. Not to say "I need to protect myself and let them get into their own trouble".

That said, I still like this story.

Dear Princess Starbutt,
you are not the only one who can save friendships. I did too, a Siren. Take that! Anyway in case you were wondering I saved this little group of kids who are the sisters of your friends (those you shattered our pendants remember?). You‘re welcome. This doesn’t mean that WE are gonna be friends in any way though, or that I am all goody now.
Not-Sincerely
Adagio Dazzle
P.S. From what I heard, your human counterpart is f***ing awesome, seriously.

Adagio‘s first and last friendship Report when this is over (IF the CMC comes together, all is possible and legit)

This is good stuff. Keep it rolling!

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How did Sweetie learn to teleport?

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She didn't: it was a spur-of-the-moment, unconscious action.

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HOW? She has no magic!

Rarity shouldn't be able to teleport or fire energy blasts either.

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Hmm.... Plot, that's the best I got. XD

I hope they get together again. This is riveting stuff thus far; keep it rolling.

You know I was expecting each of the sirens to be focused on a member of the CMC. I was thinking Aria to be the one to give advice to Scoots.

Also this is one of the few times in a fanfic where Sonata is shown to be mature and smart while retaining their personality from RR.

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We're on the same page about Aria giving advice: she'll get her turn eventually, just be patient.

As in, oddly cheerful and scatterbrained? Is that a good thing in your eyes, or is it bad?

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I mean most fics that I read that have Sonata always be portrayed as a clueless klutz who can't do anything on her own. For me, this Sonata is really refreshing to see because we see that Sonata is more than meets the eye and can show why she's been part of the Dazzling Trio. I mean why else did Adagio invite Sonata to her team all those years back in Equestria?

I hate to say it but yeah this may be for the best. In some version all three choose to do Anon A Miss and not stop, in others it was two of them that kept it going despite the misgivings of the third member.

In another one of them sold out the others or tried to, abandoning what bonds they had in the end.

So the sirens all had their takes on the CMCs each with their own methods surprisingly fitting each of their personalities. Let's see how it will all connect in the end.

Also j take the hairstyle is from our good ol communist equality pony Glim Glam right?

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Indeed. She and Aria look surprisingly alike, don't you think?

Is at up with the “save the pockets” thing? With their hands?

I wanted this to be a shipfic!!!! Even a tease would have been fine

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