An average boy named Declan Hunt living in Duluth, Minnesota is returning home from visiting his grandfather in Louisiana for a pre Christmas holiday. Declan is a super brony and rather a huge fan of the Cutie Mark Crusaders, however on his way home he gets a real big surprise.
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I wrote this MLP fanfic 2 years ago, and looking back on it it was very poorly written and structured. I have improved with my story structure and writing style, and I won’t make the mistakes seen in this fanfic or any other fanfic I write ever again.