In his short time in this alien land, Anon has learned three things: 1) Magic horses are bad at learning English. 2) They love triangles. 3) Social position is likely determined by booty size, if the big white one is anything to go by.
I'm really hoping Twilight ends up solving his speech problem ands as a result falls in love with him because of how stupid the whole thing ends up being.
9441583 Twenty minutes later and Chrysalis just had her 22nd orgasm and can do little more than lay on the floor leaking fluids while making strange mewling noises.
You are Anon, and for some reason, the horses are now in lesbians with each other. Rather than being the third wheel, you wrap yourself in a white bed-sheet and stealth your way out of the room.
This is FUN. Normally these anon-pony stories are with a really dickish, annoying Anon. This one's friggin' adorable and everyone's having so much fun.
this chapter was disappointing, they all can't be winners can they. Started off well with AJ had a nice flow and everything then Fluttershy literally walked in and just like every version of her in every story she's in, she's into beastiality and a mega slut. You could've used her base personality that would have been better but no have her ruin the scene and have it finish poorly, disappointingly, like a shitty soft-core porn flick. imo skip this chapter ya ain't missing much.
9442812 It really doesn't. Celestia already kinda fills that spot case in point, How quickly she succumbed to Anon and when she jumped on Shining Armors dick with no hesitation. AJ could've easily been a more aggressive version of Luna with more Jealousy like what Luna did with Celestia but with the Main 6. Just AJ being AJ while she pines for Anon later on would've been more entertaining than this and what it'll bring to the story. Fluttershy with her original pure hearted personality would've been more interesting to see as she's accidentally corrupted by Anon and becoming a love sick puppy for him. That's interesting but now we'll never see that 'cause rewrites never happen on this site.
As per usual I went into a tangent whilst forgetting I was replying to someone mb.
"Pinkie, dear, I fear you misunderstand the mission. We are to stop a seduction monster from taking over Equestria, not submit to an orgy." Pinkie Pie tilts her head. "Really?"
Pink Pone has a point there.
You are Fluttershy, and oh dear, you seem to have walked in on Applejack just when she was making friends with the Dominus. Then your good friend just lets the penis fall out of her mouth. You're sorry, but that's rude.
You are Applejack, and you don't like to think about the time when you first got Winona. Things just haven't been the same with Big Mac ever since then. He's your brother, and you love him, but some things a sister just isn't meant to see.
You are Anon, and for some reason, the horses are now in lesbians with each other. Rather than being the third wheel, you wrap yourself in a white bed-sheet and stealth your way out of the room.
Loving it loving it loving it! Keep this going at full speed!
I'm really hoping Twilight ends up solving his speech problem ands as a result falls in love with him because of how stupid the whole thing ends up being.
I think it's time to bring out the big guns. Something Twilight would consider only under the most dire of circumstances…
...ally with Chrysalis to subdue this demonic cuddle monstrosity!
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Twenty minutes later and Chrysalis just had her 22nd orgasm and can do little more than lay on the floor leaking fluids while making strange mewling noises.
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Strange buzzing noises, I'd say.
Anyway, onwards to strange buzzing noises!
I am so going to hell
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I would suggest Discord first, then when Eris walks/floats/etc out, then try Chrysalis.
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Not only that, but she's overflowing with so much love she reforms on the spot and professes her eternal devotion to Anon.
I haven't laughed so hard in a long time.
Well done, very well done.
The Monk
All AUTHORS, Stop using “IS ALL” its poisoning your work. Some great stories are becoming damaged by it.
When will Anon tell them that he can perfectly understand everything they say?
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He doesn't know most of what they are saying at this point.
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Aww, it would have been a good punchline.
A delightful little story. I'm glad to see someone able to make something short but not... lacking? I dunno what phrase I'm looking for there.
STEALTH!
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Oh no, I've seen stories where Chrysalis is exposed to this magnitude of lewd Anon.
Poor thing was begging Twilight for protection afterwards.
Pinky wants cream filling.
This is FUN. Normally these anon-pony stories are with a really dickish, annoying Anon. This one's friggin' adorable and everyone's having so much fun.
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Celestia wouldn't be happy with this.
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She'll get over it when someone points out the possibilities of having a threesome with a shapeshifter.
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Oooh, silly me. Of course, a reformed Changeling Queen would be willing to share with her newfound friends.
The universal rule of pornography: Knocking before entering is sacrilege.
I hope he fuck Applejacks pussy soon.
this chapter was disappointing, they all can't be winners can they.
Started off well with AJ had a nice flow and everything then Fluttershy literally walked in and just like every version of her in every story she's in, she's into beastiality and a mega slut. You could've used her base personality that would have been better but no have her ruin the scene and have it finish poorly, disappointingly, like a shitty soft-core porn flick. imo skip this chapter ya ain't missing much.
Que the nay Sayers and thumbs down on my comment.
They have fallen prey to the dangerous Anom! And now they're in lesbians with each other! I can't wait to see who's next.
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I dont know, I think its exactly because of her mega slut secret nature that makes her so hot. No one knows but the animals... and now AJ.
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It really doesn't. Celestia already kinda fills that spot case in point, How quickly she succumbed to Anon and when she jumped on Shining Armors dick with no hesitation. AJ could've easily been a more aggressive version of Luna with more Jealousy like what Luna did with Celestia but with the Main 6. Just AJ being AJ while she pines for Anon later on would've been more entertaining than this and what it'll bring to the story. Fluttershy with her original pure hearted personality would've been more interesting to see as she's accidentally corrupted by Anon and becoming a love sick puppy for him. That's interesting but now we'll never see that 'cause rewrites never happen on this site.
As per usual I went into a tangent whilst forgetting I was replying to someone mb.
This chapter is good and all, but did you subscribe to Pewdiepie?
This is so funny( and sexy). I think my favorite bit was the "warm-hue privilege", that got a laugh.
You monster! I can't, *khem* enjoy this properly! xDD I'm laughing too damn hard... :D
Pink Pone has a point there.
Yeah!
How could you, AJ?!
Huh... maybe... maybe a languages barrier isnt that bad
Sure had nice side effects
What
So adorable!
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Could ya give some links? Seems interesting.
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Shot in the dark, but it sounds like this one
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/490400/to-neer-come-down-again
LOL!!!
ok, I have to ask if the author is secretly Slaanesh. because it feels like something that she, he, it, would write
Wise