In his short time in this alien land, Anon has learned three things: 1) Magic horses are bad at learning English. 2) They love triangles. 3) Social position is likely determined by booty size, if the big white one is anything to go by.
Wait, really? That's why she's afraid of his boner? Changelings don't have sex and can die from the unfortunate case that I shall call, "Shiv'd by penis"
Wow, this is really picking up. It's grown a lot from the pure silliness in the earlier chapters to something actually resembling a cohesive plot. Admittedly, this plot is also silly and perverted to all hell, but it is a plot none the less, and I'm actually looking forward to seeing where you go with it. I'm also curious about the relationships you seem to be building. I can't say I've ever seen a RarityXCelestia ship before.
I feel like this story lost its rhythm and balance, and the characters are dancing too far away from important issues. On top of the Chrysalis section, I think you lost me.
I mean, the wanton sex is fun and all, but it honestly just feels "circumstantial". Like, they're having intercourse because it just so happens to be a good moment, regardless of who's around.
I liked the accent bit. It made relatively good sense. But I think I stopped when you started to include Spike and Sweetie Belle in the story. It's getting too far off track for me, and human Chrysalis was the first cord struck.
I appreciate the effort you've made, though. Good work!
Wait, really? That's why she's afraid of his boner?
Changelings don't have sex and can die from the unfortunate case that I shall call, "Shiv'd by penis"
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https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Traumatic_insemination
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How unfortunate
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That seems like a real design flaw for a replace-and-eat-love species.
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It's why they have mind manipulation magic, and why they can trap things in pods.
Wow, this is really picking up. It's grown a lot from the pure silliness in the earlier chapters to something actually resembling a cohesive plot. Admittedly, this plot is also silly and perverted to all hell, but it is a plot none the less, and I'm actually looking forward to seeing where you go with it. I'm also curious about the relationships you seem to be building. I can't say I've ever seen a RarityXCelestia ship before.
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I think impalement is more accurate. And really, I'd be scared too, if nothing else but because that would be a shitty way to die.
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Huh...
*<>* woah this was steep with development like 20 ° slope steep
That piece with Spike and Sweetie was pure cute
Thing are getting interesting Ihope he makes a herd.
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Can I be the vice president? Royal vizier? Any second-in-command position?
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On second thought, I'd be happy just being a normal citizen.
-Ru
How could anyone say no to a busty blond tsundere Chrissi?
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Bed bugs are a fucking nightmare to deal with, too.
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I did not need to know that particular bit of information, thankyouverymuch.
Servers me right for clicking a random link on the Internet. It's Wikipedia, I'm sure it's fine... my ass...
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Thanks for all the comments so far, and yes, the link text should have tipped you off that it was knowledge that man was not meant to know.
Lol I forgot the reason why Anom used "Finest Ass" for Royalty. Than I remember he believes their hierarchy revolves around their ass size lol
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Here lies Chrysalis
Fatally impaled by Penis.
PRICELESS how they talking to one another and have different things in mind... PRICELESS
I feel like this story lost its rhythm and balance, and the characters are dancing too far away from important issues. On top of the Chrysalis section, I think you lost me.
I mean, the wanton sex is fun and all, but it honestly just feels "circumstantial". Like, they're having intercourse because it just so happens to be a good moment, regardless of who's around.
I liked the accent bit. It made relatively good sense. But I think I stopped when you started to include Spike and Sweetie Belle in the story. It's getting too far off track for me, and human Chrysalis was the first cord struck.
I appreciate the effort you've made, though. Good work!
See, this is why communication (and not just talking) is important!