In his short time in this alien land, Anon has learned three things: 1) Magic horses are bad at learning English. 2) They love triangles. 3) Social position is likely determined by booty size, if the big white one is anything to go by.
Well, this took an interesting turn. At least Chrysalis won't have to worry about getting incinerated or sent to the moon. The punishment she receives is by far a mercy.
On one hand, I weep for the ended language shenanigans, you managed to write it in an absolutely hilarious manner. On the other, I have no idea how much longer could you keep that going. Let's see how this progresses, shall we?
Twiggles looking too hard into opportunities to ride him into battle is hilarious, though
Murderous, abducting, thieving, invading, conquering bug queen gets off with a sentence of "Try to see if you and this nice guy can fall in love and start a family. You don't have to, but give it a shot." instead of torture and execution for her evils?
I better not see anyone complaining about her sentence, the bug got off easy! And might wind up getting off easier. Hoho.
9445676 Actually, I believe Celly realizes how uncomfortable Anon makes Chrysi PLUS Chrysi is unable to use magic in this human form. A form which Chrysi is also very uncomfortable with at the moment. Celly knows Anon is mostly harmless and is using these facts to exact a bit of revenge on Chrysi AND keep her magic nullified. This is torture as far as Chrysi is concerned.
As far as she's concerned, sure. Until she gives in and realizes it's not - which, come on, she's going to. As opposed to a visit in the Pain Amplifier and prodded with nasty, sharp... pointy things!
9445676 Keep in mind, Discord got "you are sufficiently useful, I bet friendship with one of these ponies will keep you from doing evil." Similarly, Chrysalis gets, "You are able to be his broodmare, I'm going to keep you two together until stockholm syndrome sets in and you have his children."
We're comparing canon and your story-verse in that case, then. The former of which has absolutely zero overt sexuality, so it can't be appropriately compared. For that matter, Discord also got paralyzed as a statue for ten centuries. So far, Chrysalis is still getting off easy - especially since, as Celestia pointed out, execution is exactly what she should otherwise be getting. Which is also something the show can't touch on.
... I also don't think Discord CAN be killed, so it's kind of a pointless endeavor to order his death, making his sentencing a moot point, as having him hitched to Fluttershy is like shackling and collaring him to begin with due to emotional bonds. Now if he acts up he loses something precious to him. ... Honestly, his sentence isn't much different from the one your Chrysalis got. "Stick with this person and don't fuck things up." Guess if it worked for Discord...?
Slowly, the language barrier gets torn down. I actually find it funny cause of the misunderstandings, but hey you do what you do. Wonder how you're gonna end this whole story
9446111 Note there is still misunderstandings, their accents are such that if they don't talk slow, they can't understand each other, and as is, they STILL misunderstand some words. Anon thinking that Princess is 'Prince Ass' or 'Finest Ass'.... and he still believes that he is a pet of Celly, and that their rulers are picked out by who has the biggest ass...
I was really enjoying this story until now. Everypony till now wanted it. Now Celestia is forcing Chrysalis to be a sex slave for her own purposes. It just feels entirely out of place and ruins the flow of story. Especially the forcing Chrysalis to lick him to keep her trapped as a human.
I have this weird suspicion that Chrysy may have a rape fetish. She almost seems like she's challenging him to attempt something with her as she's playing hard to get, and her mind keeps concluding with every action he does (purposefully or not) is that he likes being "forceful", even though Anom is clearly uncomfortable with the idea itself.
Anyways, keep on writing. I'm enjoying this hilarious story.
I like you went with the stargate approach to language. "we were going to have every location speak a new language, but then we thought fuck that! That would get old, and be a production nightmare! " - The actor that played Daniel.
You are Anon, and this is terrible. Not only is the only other human mute, she's also foreign. Guessing by her hair and eye color, you guess Swedish or German.
Ironic seeing how there are a lot of German and Swedish people who know English very well, sometimes better than native speakers. :D
I just wonder what Discord would think, and how long before he changes into Eris whilst in Anon's company.
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And willingly gets pregnant? Oh boy the result of that fiasco....
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I was thinking less 'will-ing-ly' and more 'will-ful-ly'
*<>* This took a sharp turn .. Oh geez aint got brakes...halp
Well, this took an interesting turn. At least Chrysalis won't have to worry about getting incinerated or sent to the moon. The punishment she receives is by far a mercy.
OK. I'm a little disappointed with what happened to Chrysalis, but it's your story. Do what you want.
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Same
Well, that happened
Humanity's future secured???
On one hand, I weep for the ended language shenanigans, you managed to write it in an absolutely hilarious manner. On the other, I have no idea how much longer could you keep that going. Let's see how this progresses, shall we?
Twiggles looking too hard into opportunities to ride him into battle is hilarious, though
Now that Chrysalis has joined the party, we just need Nightmare Moon and Daybreaker to complete the set
Did Twilight just accidentally do anal?
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No hand-jobs for Discord and Tirek?
(Presumably even [AUTHOR] won't go as far as have him molest Cozy Glow)
Murderous, abducting, thieving, invading, conquering bug queen gets off with a sentence of "Try to see if you and this nice guy can fall in love and start a family. You don't have to, but give it a shot." instead of torture and execution for her evils?
I better not see anyone complaining about her sentence, the bug got off easy! And might wind up getting off easier. Hoho.
This chapter while good lacked a certain something that all the other chapters had i made do but really i expected more
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Actually, I believe Celly realizes how uncomfortable Anon makes Chrysi PLUS Chrysi is unable to use magic in this human form. A form which Chrysi is also very uncomfortable with at the moment. Celly knows Anon is mostly harmless and is using these facts to exact a bit of revenge on Chrysi AND keep her magic nullified. This is torture as far as Chrysi is concerned.
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As far as she's concerned, sure. Until she gives in and realizes it's not - which, come on, she's going to. As opposed to a visit in the Pain Amplifier and prodded with nasty, sharp... pointy things!
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Keep in mind, Discord got "you are sufficiently useful, I bet friendship with one of these ponies will keep you from doing evil."
Similarly, Chrysalis gets,
"You are able to be his broodmare, I'm going to keep you two together until stockholm syndrome sets in and you have his children."
I don’t know how you keep churning these out so quickly, but I’m also not about to complain. Keep up the excellent work!
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shit like that is why i'm convinced the ponies don't know what friendship actually is.
Dang, my favorite character .
Hope she'll be in Pony form for the ''action''
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We're comparing canon and your story-verse in that case, then. The former of which has absolutely zero overt sexuality, so it can't be appropriately compared. For that matter, Discord also got paralyzed as a statue for ten centuries. So far, Chrysalis is still getting off easy - especially since, as Celestia pointed out, execution is exactly what she should otherwise be getting. Which is also something the show can't touch on.
... I also don't think Discord CAN be killed, so it's kind of a pointless endeavor to order his death, making his sentencing a moot point, as having him hitched to Fluttershy is like shackling and collaring him to begin with due to emotional bonds. Now if he acts up he loses something precious to him. ... Honestly, his sentence isn't much different from the one your Chrysalis got. "Stick with this person and don't fuck things up." Guess if it worked for Discord...?
This story just keeps getting better and better.
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Eeyup.
-Ru
Slowly, the language barrier gets torn down. I actually find it funny cause of the misunderstandings, but hey you do what you do. Wonder how you're gonna end this whole story
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Note there is still misunderstandings, their accents are such that if they don't talk slow, they can't understand each other, and as is, they STILL misunderstand some words. Anon thinking that Princess is 'Prince Ass' or 'Finest Ass'.... and he still believes that he is a pet of Celly, and that their rulers are picked out by who has the biggest ass...
Awh, Twilight sex scene happened mostly off screen
Also: Reee@3DPD Chrissy
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Except it isn't to her. Long-term, public, and who is right there for some of the worst bits? The princesses.
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Hey, I like that stuff about her. I mean, sure. I don't want Chryssy in town, but she has a certain Shego-ish charm to her.
I was really enjoying this story until now. Everypony till now wanted it. Now Celestia is forcing Chrysalis to be a sex slave for her own purposes. It just feels entirely out of place and ruins the flow of story. Especially the forcing Chrysalis to lick him to keep her trapped as a human.
I have this weird suspicion that Chrysy may have a rape fetish. She almost seems like she's challenging him to attempt something with her as she's playing hard to get, and her mind keeps concluding with every action he does (purposefully or not) is that he likes being "forceful", even though Anom is clearly uncomfortable with the idea itself.
Anyways, keep on writing. I'm enjoying this hilarious story.
Keep it up friend
The idea is really funny, but there is too much sex for the sake of sex. It's a shame, as it could have been a rather awesome comedy.
I like you went with the stargate approach to language.
"we were going to have every location speak a new language, but then we thought fuck that! That would get old, and be a production nightmare! "
- The actor that played Daniel.
Yeah this keeps getting better!
Brilliant
Ironic seeing how there are a lot of German and Swedish people who know English very well, sometimes better than native speakers. :D
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Surprice Butt Sex
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Anal is never an accident. It may be a surprise, though.
Well... Were getting somewere... Neat
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That is so true........and german has a lot of words that are actually somewhat like the english counterpart.....
Love the multi 1st person pov......expertly done 👍
Nooooo! You've taken my beautiful queen and turned her into a human!
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2nd person
Meh