As Applejack is working the farm, she hears her sister scream. When she can't aid her cornered sister, an odd being steps in and risks it's own life for that of the fillies.
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bronystrongwing
I seem to argue with myself a lot.
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Amazing!
*sniff* no not today....as a Brony I would have done the same!
Jumping in front of Deadly claws. My ancestors Coming from africa Would have BOOKED it out. and i would do the same
Anyone that would jump in the way of that is a valiant and righteous one indeed. May he rest in peace.
I would like to see more of this man's story.
A nice short story.
I didn't expect such a positive response from everypony, thank you so much!
Short but sweet.
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Dear god, the wall of text!
But seriously, please space this out a bit more. And start a new paragraph every time a different character speaks.
...And this whole story could have been dragged out a bit longer.
But, yeah, his was a nice, simple one-shot. Not many grammatical mistakes, and uses decent, descriptive language.
Overall a nice read.
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Thanks for the advice! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
This story is really freaken good great job
Just a small tiny isty bitsy teaser: the man's name is Allan Grace. The rest you'll have to find out in my next fic.
If this seems like shameless self advertisement, that's because it is! If you enjoyed this short story, please recommend it to friends. I'm trying to see if I can break 600 views.
P.S.: thank you for putting up with my B.S.
Beautiful
The pace was too fast and lacked detail. It could have been better. Good try though.