The CMC go in search of the Spirit of the Desert after hearing about it from a visiting pony. Apple Bloom gets seperated from the others and is in serious trouble until she is rescued by the spirit itself.
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This is my very first fic ever.
Interesting...
Bad influences 101. Thanks Art...
I just can't stop smiling after the last two sentences
436466 Thanks glad you liked it
Ending was all "d'awwwwwwwwwwwww"
Ultra dawwwww ending
Nice ending.
I also liked that Lyra-reference. And that the focus of the story remained where it was supposed to be for the most time: On Little Ponies.
528422 Thanks....I had a sad ending in mind at first but I didnt have the heart to go through with it. (Also would have been kinda hard to write a sequel)
Tan anticlimatico la presencia de Celestia.