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Cmdr Brohoof


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The CMC go in search of the Spirit of the Desert after hearing about it from a visiting pony. Apple Bloom gets seperated from the others and is in serious trouble until she is rescued by the spirit itself.

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Comments ( 10 )

This is my very first fic ever.:derpytongue2:

Bad influences 101. Thanks Art...

I just can't stop smiling after the last two sentences:twilightsmile:

436466 Thanks glad you liked it

Ending was all "d'awwwwwwwwwwwww":twilightsmile:

Ultra dawwwww ending:yay:

Nice ending. :twilightsmile:

I also liked that Lyra-reference. And that the focus of the story remained where it was supposed to be for the most time: On Little Ponies.

528422 Thanks....I had a sad ending in mind at first but I didnt have the heart to go through with it. (Also would have been kinda hard to write a sequel)

Tan anticlimatico la presencia de Celestia.

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