• Published 31st Oct 2018
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A Nightmarish Trick - Wandering Pigeon



Trixie's ready to deliver a special Nightmare Night performance, but she isn't ready for what's actually in store for her.

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Comments ( 16 )

Wasn't bad, not sure about ABDL stuff with Chrysalis unless you add even more Changeling twist to it, is sort of made a disconnect with the two of them. Still, it was a nice try in mixing the two together.

9263907
Thanks! I agree it would've been nice to have a deeper connection between Chrysalis and her chosen form of revenge, but still, good ole fashioned humiliation never fails to do the trick for your enemies.

A very spooky AB/DL fic for Nightmare Night, and a pretty well written one too. I like the way you integrated Chrysalis' ambitions and personality, as well as changeling stuff in to mix it up. :twilightsmile:

9263927
Glad you liked it! It's been a while since I've written Chryssi so it's good to hear I did well.

You had me fully and completely at mind control

9264035
I've been meaning to do a fic with mind control for so long now. Will probably do more in the future... hopefully.:twilightsheepish:

9264168
Yes please!
Probably my biggest fetish

Being stuck in messy diapers gets an automatic thumbs up!

9264364
A good policy there, cool guy:rainbowdetermined2:

oh god maybe I shouldn't have done this Trixie this all my fault she going thought this stuff!

9264477
Oh Trixie's fine. Give her a bit and she'll start to enjoy it. Eventually...

9264525
you not understand this my doing I reason she in the upcoming scp release tonight.

It certainly does show Chrysalis is pulling no punches in getting even with those who thwarted her plans back in Season 6. Sadly, as was noted, Trixie would be the easiest target.

I kind of wondered if Chrysalis would use her hypnosis on Trixie. It definitely was played well as Trixie would definitely put up a good psychic battle. Trixie may be a lot of things but her pride would keep her from giving in so easily to such tactics.

The idea of Chrysalis learning to feed on misery is most intriguing. She could definitely do that if Thorax was able to find another way to maintain his diet along with the rest of the hive. If Thorax can change and adapt so can Chrysalis and, well, misery is pretty much as strong an emotion as love.

9264543
If Chrysalis does manage to find a way to feed off misery, I would imagine things would only get worse for poor Trixie too. No way Chrysalis could resist vengeance and a good meal on top of that.

The great and oblivious Trixie. How in the hell do you come up with this stuff?! :rainbowlaugh:

9267191
Aww, thanks. It's nothing too special, but I'm glad you like it :twilightsmile:

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