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Maxwell_Edison


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This story is a sequel to Whiplash


Great news! Featherweight is able to go onto the trip! There's so much to do, so little time to do it. Luckily, Featherweight has Pipsqueak to help him get ready and set to go to Vanhoover. Though for some reason, something feels off about Featherweight. Something just feels...weird.

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“D-do you think the rest of the student council members want me here?” Featherweight asked, somewhat nervously.

“I, uhm, well no. Of course not. What could possibly have made you think that?” Pipsqueak asked, beginning to eat.

If you want Pip's response to sound comforting, either add a "don't" between "members" and "want" or change Pip's response to "yes".

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It was supposed to say not want me here. Sorry.its late

Well done! Awesome chapter! I can't wait to read more!

Oh yeah, chapter 3 would have been way too early for this.

Please do another story about after rhe trip. We would like to see how Featherweight and Pip are doing since they confessed their true feelings and how Feather is coping with what happened.

Also I kinda want to see Spoiled Rich get what she deserves.

After reading both this and the fic it was sequel to, I think you have done an excellent job of crafting a romance between the two of these colts. Spoiled doesn't get any real comeuppance, but seeing as the two colt's love flowered anyway, would there be any real need to? It's nice after all that after the sudden realisation after a long time of battling internally at the end of Whiplash, culminated and arrived at its natural conclusion at the end of this. Good pair of fics you got here. :twilightsmile:

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