It's the end of the world, and I died.
Well not really, I managed to stay alive because God decided I was worthy of a new life with cool powers and I get to be with my family in this new world...too bad there are a lot of things keeping me away from them still.
So watch as I flounder around with my new powers, meet new friends, and save my family as monsters I know and don't know appear and try to destroy my new home.
good to see you writing again and I am gonna track this story for now but did love Life of A Nobody so far
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Thank you, and don't worry I'm still writing, just waiting to get a good amount of chapters than just gonna mass post
This is probably what she’s thinking.https://youtu.be/ddi_M1gka1k
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WHAT?
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Well...that is true
I will eagerly await the next chapter
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Thank you, as you can clearly see me, and my wonderful friend Bio, are having a blast writing this
Another great chapter
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thank you
I've sorted by updated for hie fics, and this is a page or two in. I hope it turns out good, it seems desently long, anyway. The important bit is if you've got a good "voice" going, and maybe not too many grammar mistakes.
Dunno why I felt like narrating my thought process when I could have just looked, but it happened.
Felt a bit awkward feeling, but seemed to get a bit better by the end of the chapter. I dunno why you bothered to define the ages of your characters. I could assume the parents are around 25-30ish years older, so just the brother and the main characters could be listed, if important.
Bunch of missing commas
Looks like someone is going to be rather busy in the future.
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Absolutely
Cant wait for more i love this story.
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Thank you
Nice to see an update :D
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Thank you
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This chapter answered questions I didn't know I had
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Funny how that works sometimes huh?
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Yeah
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Hmm Sounds About Right
More Soon I hope
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There will be more, me and Bio just have to get through a whole lot of stories
I love this story and cant wait to read more
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Thank you
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that's pinkie for ya
Nice chapter, will wait for more.
Didn't this story used to be complete?
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nope, and if so, I might have accidentally put that there instead of hiatus
This chapter pisses me of to no end, it seems every time Anna gets a TINY bit of backbone she's trampled and goes all submissive... and I really hate some much other shit that goes into this chapter that makes the MC worthless... if the other races are 'superior' in almost all other fashions
I loved how you put that twist on changling drones and how they can fuse with others to help heal them!
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Thank you, it was a good idea Bio came up with
Omg he's a perverted old father!
Holy shit this is hilarious
That last bit of fuckery... lol
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Its not the end of the story yet, so stay tuned
Rather a poor showing that none of the Mane Six were engaging it. I can think of one way that COULD happen (Fluttershy took the lead, but it ran away from her), but this is treading dangerously close to Mary Sue territory.
Why does he need to scatter the chests around, rather that appearing in the library or.somewhere convenient like that? Also, Twilight being level 2 while also having practiced her art at least as much as Rainbow Dash and being able to pull off what she did in "Boast Busters" is going to take some justification. Actually their levels being so low in general seems... a bad sign for the literary quality.
Why not just hand him 5,000 bits to shortcut his citizenship?Wait, nevermind. They set her up as a gaurd for Pipsqueak, and since contact with him was what she wanted the citizenship for most urgently it all works out I guess.They should have assigned three shifts of scribes to copy the strategy guide if there is not a spell for that.
Since when is Twilight NOT able to hold her own as a combat mage? I mean, she should be widening her array of offensive options beyond "horn lazor(sic)" since elemental typing is important with fiends... feels like shoehorning them into the Final Fantasy X architypes. I hope to see Twilight at least using horn lazors and liberal teleportation.
Did not really expect to see a complete tag on this one, looks like ima read again.
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Yeah, I didn't expect it to be done either. Even if me and Bio could have done more, we have a lot of other stories to work on so eh
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That is true I've been enjoying them quite a bit, especially Poké Fans
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Thanks for enjoying mine and Bio's nonsense