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Crescent Cloud


An ethereal kinsman of the moon here. Crescent cloud is both my online handle and the name of my OC (pictured). Cheers!

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We all know what happened at the mirror pond: Pinkie Pie cloned herself to spend more time with her friends, things got out of hand, and Twilight weeded out the real Pinkie and sent all the clones back...or, almost all of them. One clone was different, and decided to sneak away while the pandemonium ensued. She went on a journey to Manehattan to try to start a new life for herself. This is her story, from her point of view.

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Comments ( 19 )

Loved the way you explained that short moment in the episode into such a long one. There are not many stories like this & I like what you did! Though there might be few minor mistakes, this story is lovely! :heart:xxxx

I think the chapters are somewhat short, but I really liked the story.
Awesome Job. :)

I love that this was more of a psychological journey than just action crammed together

Wow I figured back in season 6 saddle row review Somebody will found out that the clone pinkie pie got away Interesting so far

Aww poor clone pinkie pie she so confused and depressed and she was thinking of going back to the mirror pool but she really don't want to give up

Wow I'm surprised that nobody didn't make any fan art about the pinkie pie clone At least the one that got away Still that will be cool to see

I guess history can help a person out or pony I mean But I Wonder what she's gonna change her name into

Omg Coco Pommel so this is before season 4 came around but poor coco she going to be so Miserable with that crazy suri

“Oh, no, I don’t think so, Suri is just getting me used to how it works in the fashion world in Manehattan. It’s every mare and colt for themselves, y’know.”

Wow That brings back of really bad memories about what she says

whoa Pinkie /mina Cutie mark is gone How's that Even possible I wonder what's up with that

I wonder what does that mean her Cutie mark is disappearing I wonder what's going to happen to her

I'm not surprised that Maud We'll find out that Pinkie/mina is a clone But somehow she just shook it off And letting her live like that that's pretty cool of her And I feel back for Coco she should not deserve this kind of punishment with suri she so crazy

I even gave her a present one day to express how much I appreciated her generosity and friendship: a sewing package with a few spools of different colored thread. One was rainbow colored.

Oh wow mina Brought the rainbow colored sole To be honest I didn't see that coming

I guess that's a good thing that Coco knows the truth about pinkie/mina about being a clone

oh dear me Her cutie mark is gone Again what is that mean what's gonna happen to her and I guess this is during the time Of season 4 finale

Coco has a good point there mina Really know how to make people feel better even though she doesn't know experience but she somehow knows how to say the right words that's actually pretty interesting

Yellow daffodils what is that mean But that men she got herself a new cutie mark that's cool And we finally made it to season 6 saddle row review nice called back

So basically she has her own way to make people smile that's really awesome and I can see her as a therapy And helping other people or ponies out of their struggles and everything this was pretty awesome but looks like this one more page

That is a pretty good story I like that to see how the pinkie pie clone the one that got away known as mina Been doing ever since we saw her in that episode So this was a pretty awesome writing Awesome job with that

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