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MisterNick


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Rainbow Dash loves to fly. In fact as far as she knows it's all she's ever done. One evening after a particularly arduous flight she discovers that she may just be able to fly further and faster than any other pony.

Will she be able to blow past the barriers that are holding her back from exploring further than she's ever explored before and perhaps land some tasty snack foods in the process? Or will she have to continue flying in the same patterns for the rest of her life?

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🎵 What goes up must come down
Spinnin' wheel got to go 'round
Talkin' 'bout your troubles it's a cryin' sin
Ride a painted pony let the spinnin' wheel spin...

Ummmmmm. I liked, but... I think this needs a dark tag. Big time. RD gets thrown away like garbage. If they were like “I really like that one, let’s spend the extra to refurbish, then I wouldn’t call for the dark tag. But that ending is daaaaarrrrrrk.

9170581
You might have the reference material for the story correct.

Excellent as always

9171047
Thanks!


9170581
I do enjoy some Blood Sweat and Tears from time to time.


9170607
I get what you're saying but to me it just feels more like a turn. Perhaps similar to an ending out of a Rod Serling show or something. Maybe it's a point of perspective with me because I've got like four other stories that are darker than this one that I'm noodling with. Believe me I looked at a few other tags and hemmed and hawed over it but this one just didn't feel... I guess dark enough for me to tag it dark... does that make sense?

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