i wanna shine brighter than the sun in the sky.
This story is a sequel to Love Is Spreading All Around
Because of an incident of cheating in the Wonderbolts Academy, Lightning Dust was disgraced and disqualified.
Why? She cheated and her former best friend, Rainbow Dash told on her to the coach of the Wonderbolts.
Now, she comes back, stronger than ever, and she wants her vengeance on Rainbow Dash.
"I will have my revenge!" she says.
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And another villainization of Lightning Dust.
Downvote.
Interesting story, keep up the great work
And I see nothing wrong with Lightning Dust being the lead villain.
Awesome chapter
Can’t wait for more
Thanks for the support! What you could do more is to follow my account. Thx!
This is dark
Still a great story though
I don't really get this:
This doesn't have anything to do with Equestrian magic, so why would she need to go to Equestria?
I am in no way hating on this story, I would just like to have this question answered.
Great work on this chapter
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A secret for now. Answers will reveal in the next few chapters.
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Ah, okay, thank you.
Ohh that makes sense
Shit this is gruesome.
~R
Poor Dashie
I hope she gets saved soon.
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She will. By Soarin.
What’s with the slow uploads
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My friend came for a sleepover on Friday. Sorry for the late updates.
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Damn, first time ever that someone cencored bad words in a story (as far as I've read).
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Yeah, I know I'm not supposed to use rude words, but I just can't help myself. I read more stories with rude words, so I thought I might try it out.
Soarin snapped
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I'd say more, but must keep reading!!
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Eeyup
I think the reason you had no comments on this page is that everyone couldn't stop reading. As this is one of my favorite stories ever, I now, after reading this lord-knows-how-many times, can comment about the awesomeness of this page. You, as an author, rock. Even if this story's prequel isn't up to my usual standards, you 100 percent make up for it with this one. Cliffhangers are in all the right places, as well as the for shadowing. It reveals just the right amount so readers are guessing and inferring, but not being bored. This is such a good story, this page in particular (and the fight because, well, it's a fight scene), and I cannot, in words, express this enough(which surprises even myself, as I always have words). Just.... Good job.
Again, your cliffhangers are what cause your lack of comments, not that your story is bad or anything. Good job, I'm gonna continue reading now!!
Same thing as before, yada yada yada, reading now.
I am going to be totally honest and open right now, and I do not wish to be hated. This is still awesome, so, if you want, ignore what I say and shun me. But an author deserves honest feedback, and that is what I will give.
This chapter is by far my least favorite in the entire story before and after this. You have the part of her soul, that's cool. But she screams suddenly, transforms, then is completely normal after roughly a sentence. Her response makes zero sense whatsoever, and, well, worst part of the story.
That is only my opinion. Please do not take offense to what I have said here. If it pains you, I understand, and I'm sorry for that.
I don't understand why you have so many dislikes. The story is so far good.
Holy crap I love this story so far
Students from CPA!!?
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What did she ever do to them?
See you itself said she and her friends but why do you hate only her?
She didn't cheat. She saved your life from the accident you former classmate caused
The geodes are warning them about the danger Rainbow is in.
AWESOME!!
Love the story so far! ❤
Do that's why the other geodes lost their colours, they can't work unless there is all of the elements. Since the element of loyalty is destroyed they lost their colours!
Amazing Story BTW!
Yes!
I didn't know she had powers like that
WHATTT!!!
LIGHTNING DUST YOU BITCH!!