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SeleneMizutani


i wanna shine brighter than the sun in the sky.

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This story is a sequel to Origin: Magic


This is a rewritten version of the famous little number 'Cupcakes', only this time Rainbow Dash isn't the victim. Pinkie Pie murders Twinkleshine and turns her into cupcakes. She has been doing this ever since...when?

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Excuse me, that's a question I really need to ask. Do you think your readers are idiots who can't tell first person from third? :facehoof:

Also, writing Cupcakes spin-offs is beating a horse that is even more dead than Twinkleshine. If you really need to jump some bandwagon, at least choose one that is still relevant. And possibly don't write it in a telly, dull way which makes the original seem like a literary masterpiece.

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Thanks for the advice! I'll try to do better.

I always consider it important to ask: Do you want any advice?

Also, here's a story of mine that is also a 'Cupcakes' spin off:

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/389031/mauds-cupcakes

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