Open for Art Commissions. I write gay romantic comedies with ponies now. Get off my back, MOM.
This story is a sequel to Side A - The Guard
Steel Bastion has everything he wants: a loving husband, tons of bits, and a career that lets him beat the crap out of monsters.
Too bad his loving husband decides to adopt a random bug creature from the swamp and raise it as their own foal.
Is it too late to put him back?
Rated Teen for suggestive material.
Profanity added due to Steel Bastion.
Sex tag for suggestive material.
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Oh my gosh so this is the story you've talking in your posts for months. I and many of readers have been waiting for this!
at the beginning is an interview/inquest taking place towards the end of side A i believe?
only one error my dude in chapter 2 was at the part where it's talking about steel's scar 'the pony he was going ''into see''. should be 'to see'
jumping back to the first chapter for a second this part stood out to me ''He didn’t want to relive his life with the illness. The thing that took his husband away from him.'' if you go the falsettos route I - Will - Rage At -You so fast ya won't be able to see it coming!
I’M SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW!!!!
I didn't realize that this went up. I guess that's what I get for not following you. I'm mid fic right now, but i'll make sure to read this once I finish the one i'm currently reading
Pretty good start so far. I'm liking the dynamic between steel and floral so far. I did notice that this is marked as a sequel, how much if this is going to be flashback and how much is going to be after side A?
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Its like Side A in that all of it is a flashback. None of it should overlap with Side A outside of the very end.
Side C, on the other hand, fills in the gaps in the Canterlot Wedding.
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...somehow i managed to miss the fact that Side A is a flashback. I should probably go back and re-read it to see if i missed anything else super obvious. Anyway, i'm looking forward to Coco's backstory but i'm interested in seeing more canterlot wedding stuff and beyond.
I'm left wanting for more, looking forward to that. :3
Err.. Is it still alive? I want more *nudge-nudge*
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Yes, yes, I am writing it. Im almost done the second chapter for the Soarin story Im doing and this one is after that
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That's amazing news! Sorry for bothering : )
I need this story for my life to progress forward
Welp this is off to a good start thus far. I'm loving Steel's reaction to Cocoa's initial appearance. The constant yammering about Flo sleeping with someone else is very charming a way. A way that results in someone whining about everything.
I do hope you come back for this story eventually.
I’ll be forever sad this story got cancelled. I would have loved to see baby Cocoa.
I LITERALLY JUST BINGED ALL OF SIDE A AND DEALT THE DEATH BLOW THAT SIDE B IS CANCELLED?? OMFG
I LOVED EVERYTHING ABOUT ALL OF THIS AND THANK YOU FOR ALL THE SMILES AND LAUGHTER.