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"If you agree with me then why aren't you nodding?" Trevor, March 20th, 2010


Twilight is searching through boxes in her storage room under the castle from salvaged pieces of the library. While looking through them she finds a tape. She invites her friends over so they can watch it together for movie night. What they see isn't expected.

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Hmm.... This was strange. I wonder how she made M.A.T. or could it be that he was already made but I mostly wonder what destroyed him. It's kinda surprising that Twilight would show feelings for an artificial intelligence.

Okay, see here, the problem is that you made me feel for a robot. And sir, if you can do that then I am scared as to what you'll do next. Really though, this was so... heartwarming? Sad? Uplifting? Some kind of combination of all three. Also, here's a small note: Don't make a sequel to this. It's perfect as it is. Granted, maybe a little short, but otherwise I can't think of much to change, aside from a few small grammar issues. Fantastic story. I do hope to see the next come out just as great.

The whole premise of the story was to get people to ask those questions. Is it possible that a truly sapient artificial being could exist at some point? And if so, would it be a great help to society or our doom? I'm glad you consider this strange, and I am aware that there unanswered questions, but please remember that every good story has unanswered questions.
Thank you very much for that, and I'm glad I was able to accomplish such a feat of making you feel for the robot. I don't mean to scare you :twilightsmile:. I think I'll take your advice and not make a sequel. I like the idea of people deciding for themselves whether or not Twilight went back and found him. If you are curious the next short story I write will be about Fluttershy and Gummy Bears. Heh heh. Anyways, have a good day.

I liked it, sad but touching.

Thank you. I try my best.

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