"If you agree with me then why aren't you nodding HARDER!?" Trevor, March 20th, 2010
Changeling 13.789 is a changeling receptionist for the Foundation University (or FU), a prestigious college, and he needs to keep it's reputation as high as possible. Ponies call, he answers, they question, he answers, they hang up, he hangs up. Simple and to the point. Nothing could possibly go wrong right? ...uh...right?
it's only rated teen for a few innuendos.
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….I don't get it. Is it just one joke?
8961402
The story or my life? cause either way, the answer is 'yes'.
What? I don't know, but good work.
8961406
I don't know either, but thank you.
this story is strange, not bad, but kind of confusing. I don't really know what our protagonists job is for. Good story, just needs a little more context. The dialogue was pretty funny though.
8961414
I see. I'll endeavor to make future stories with your tips in mind.
I'll possibly be making a bonus chapter for this, but I'm still not entire sold on the idea. Just spit-balling ya know?
Once again, thank you for the input.
This so amazing. The main Ling portrayed had a level of innocence and compassion that made me laugh. The way you have added humor to your stories it wonderous and exciting. The Ling's level of naiveté makes them cute and relatable. I truly hope this character will have more interactions, 13 is an interesting Ling and they are the perfect amount of cuteness for a story.
8961405
I'm sorry, but this was too confusing. I just don't get it.
8961416
whatever you do, don't stop writing! If this story was more an exercise in getting something out there, that's fine. Don't feel pressured to force something on something you never intended to continue unless you want to.
8961419
Thank you. I may or may not be planning on having him in other stories. I'm glad I was able to portray the innocence I was going for.
8961428
fair enough.
8961513
No worries, I don't plan on not writing or anything like that, I'm just saying I like it when people give me constructive criticism like you did. It helps me improve and make my stories the best quality they can be. So, again, I thank you.