One day, years ago, a yellow Pegasus was offered a treat. Little did she or anyone else know, that it would be the end of Ponykind
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"If you agree with me then why aren't you nodding HARDER!?" Trevor, March 20th, 2010
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Cool and scary story! Little Tigress's art is amazing! :D
BTW:
"One day, yeas ago, a yellow Pegasus was offered a treat. Little did she or anyone else know that it would be the end of Ponykind" It should be:
"One day, years ago, a yellow Pegasus was offered a treat. Little did she or anyone else know, that it would be the end of Ponykind."
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Thank you. Yes, her art is amazing. I'll make the correction right now, thanks.
Well, the story itself was humorous and ridiculous enough for me to enjoy myself. But the way it was written was juvenile. Do a grammar sweep. Check for periods, run on sentences, capitalization. If you do that, you could have something worth much more than it is at present.
"...booouncing here and there and everywheeere..."
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That's a creative picture you have there. Sorry for the derailing ppl. :(
Hahaha
That was great! I'm a sucker for apocalyptic stories and this concept is awesome! 
I'm glad you liked the artwork, I enjoyed making it as much as I enjoyed reading this amazing story. Keep it up Tribot!
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I WAS THINKING THE SAME THING!
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I'll take that into consideration.
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😂
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Thank you for the compliment Tigress, and again thank you for time you spent making the art. I'll do my best to continue to live up to your expectations
This was amazing.
And its balanced perfectly for a short story like this.
You get a like :D
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Thank you. I appreciate the like. Have on back.
One of my friends told me an ingredient in Gummy Bears is bone marrow. I don't know if it's true or not.
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Let's...uh keep that between us.
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You're welcome, and that's OK!
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You are welcome and thank you. :) Don't forget to make the last punctuation correction!
Edit: Actually, I think this would be a bit smoother for the description edit:
"One day, years ago, a yellow Pegasus was offered a treat. Little did she or anyone else know, it would be the end of Ponykind."