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"If you agree with me then why aren't you nodding HARDER!?" Trevor, March 20th, 2010

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Donut Joe expect his life to be a simple one. Sell donuts. Period. No need to elaborate. That was the plan, but sometimes plans go astray.
Donut Joes plan goes astray when a little purple and green dragon decides to enter his life...even if unwillingly.


The current cover is simply filler until I get better art.

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 20 )

Please continue this. This looks fun. :pinkiesmile:

Okay. This was a little strange but pretty good.

8855885
This is actually similar to something that happened to a friend of mine. Just replace the donut shop with a bar.

You're stories have been lacking in Spike for some reason. :applejackunsure:

8856278
He's almost old enough to pop in. I'm planning for him to show up in either chapter 7 or 8.

But...isn't Discord supposed to be a statue at this point in time? :applejackunsure:

8856437
I'm glad you noticed. I doubted anyone would point that bit out. There's a future chapter explaining the predicament later. I know it sounds like an excuse but trust me...
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Why did you suddenly switch from first person to third person in the middle? I mean, I get that it was a flashback, but that switch still doesn't make much sense.

8857973
Exactly.
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You're waiting for an explanation aren't you?
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fine. It's because a lot of the time it's reversed. I was curious on seeing how a story switching from First to Third in a flashback would be as good as a Third to First transition. Most of this entire story is trial and error.

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He is literally the physical manifestation of order, whether it be grammatical order, lawful order, or just plain universal order. He doesn't like me very much. I tend to let my stories take turns he'd wish I didn't allow.

This was a nice little interlude.

Ah, don't worry about it. Besides, the baked sugar totally made up for it.

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