It Was Raining

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After a semi-long period of not seeing one another, Discord and Fluttershy walk with each other in the chilly, yet, peaceful weather.

They soon speak about the atmosphere conditions, going more into a personal topic... Relating to their own connection between them.

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Scroll Keeper

Scroll Keeper #1 · May 23rd, 2018 · 1 · ·

Not bad at all.

TheDiscordLover1200

TheDiscordLover1200 #2 · May 23rd, 2018 · 1 · ·

This is wonderful

Dr midnight

Dr midnight #3 · May 23rd, 2018 · 1 · ·

this is sweet.

misskoifishpony

misskoifishpony #4 · May 24th, 2018 · 3 · ·

Hi Flutters!:D Great see you here on Fimfiction:D! Congrats on publishing your first story^^ Yay! I'm so excited for you and I'm glad that your story is receiving so much positive reception so far:) For your first Fluttercord one shot story and first story on MLP overall, you did sooooo much better than I did back at my first time believe meXD So I'm deeply impressed with what I'm seeing so far^^ It was cute, fluffy, it embodies the cover pic, everything I need from a Fluttercord oneshot^^ My only nitpicks would be my desire to know what it is that made the two separate for bit, a couple of grammar mistakes here and there, and some (not alot) moments where Fluttershy and Discord didn't sound quite like themselves (in their dialogue that is, but that comes with time and practice, trust me.) Keep writing and keep up with the great work, you're off to a great start trust me <3

FluttershyFilly Yay

FluttershyFilly Yay #5 · May 24th, 2018 · 1 · ·

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Thank you for that, MissKoi!

Yep, I know there may be some errors in the story that I may need to work out. I'm glad you had pointed them out though! It helps!

misskoifishpony

misskoifishpony #6 · May 27th, 2018 · 1 · ·

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Haha lol I only point out the grammar thing because well its my biggest weakness in my writing, so I want you to learn from my mistakes and surpass my writing skills by learning from meXD Lol! But trust me your little grammar mistakes are very very little. Usually for me, reading the story before posting it will help spot those mistakes:) Especially if you read it aloud to yourself:) As embarrassing as it is to do it, it really helps:)