This story is about two different creatures of two different kingdoms.
There is a kingdom were it only rains day and night. The king of this land is a creature of Pure chaos. He only know's darkness and sadness his whole life, until he meets a beautiful pegasus mare with a yellow buttercream coat and a pink mane. She was the fourth princess of a kingdom were the sun always shines bright and happy. In this kingdom only the Royal family had the power to control the sun with their voices. Fluttershy was meant to be the rain kings bride. Can two people who are so different in their own way love each other ?
I got the idea from Soredemo Sekai wa Utsukushii ( anime ).
The credit for the cover goes to C-puff.
This is the first time im writing a story so please if you see any mistakes please tell me.
I swear to god that was awesome
Thank you so much, i will try hard with the next chapter.
Please credit the artist, C-Puff. You can't just go taking other people's artwork for your stories without giving them credit.
Interesting story, but the grammar and spelling could use a lot of work.
I'm a little confused as to what's going on in this chapter. What are those ponies doing? Why are two colts in a bar?
Well at least I know what happens in this chapter
It seems like a good story, but there are a lot of spelling and grammar errors. For example, you mean summoned, not "summed".
Oohh thank you kurusagi16 for the tip i will Change it
I'm sorry Everyone but I'm not so good at english so Please if you see Any mistakes Please tell me i can learn from it
It's a nice story, but the plot is very confusing.
Don't worry that comes in time.
The more chapter There wil be the more you will know and then it will make a lot more sence.
I promise to work hard on the next chapter so don't worry
I agree with everyone else. It's an interesting concept, but it could use some heavy editing.
I know
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i'd be interested in being an editor for you, if you're interested.
I absolutely..... LOVED IT!!!
Thank you very much
That isn't really a finish it leaves more questions than answers
Also:
I noticed a few of these lol. I didn't know "quests" could talk
Other than the insane amount of typos and need for a sequel *cough* "hint" *cough* it was very enjoyable
I mention the typos only because in some instances I had trouble placing your intended term but it wasn't to debilitating to the story as a whole keep up the good work and I'm serious when I said I want a sequel cause
is best pony 😄
Thank you, silent _knight.
What you said about the amount of typos, i'm still learning with all of that, Quest was meant too be guest. Thanks for pointing it out
and i will think about making a sequel, doesn't say i will make a sequel.
didn't he just put her in prison
well fluttershy deserve it