Passive.

okay. I was right that you have great potential, your just writing stories I can't connect to, however unlike in "dark secret" this one's plot is rather sound. so you do you, i'll do me and we don't do eachother

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I laughed at the last part of your comment.

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AH! MARKIPLER REFERENCE!!

I really like the idea of yandere Celestia, it's a Interesting concept that can be played around with. Your execution is worthwhile and while I don't really like the torture scenes, I can see what you were going for so a good read regardless. I might give this idea my own take on it. Feeling inspired lol

"I really am sorry Spike. I just.... don't know what to do right now. I loved her so much. I even wanted to spend the rest of my life with her."

Ok that would litterly be impossible, Twilight is an Allicorn, an immortal, and she is a mortal, does she.....not realize this? This might cause problems in the future....

I'm more curious on what about Luna? Because she was a princess so how would she cover that up?