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Ah it’s up. Have a upvote to its success.
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Thank you. Congratulations on being the first to comment.
Have a second upvote for it from me!
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Thanks for the support.
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You are welcome!
Hiya, quick question. Whats the difference between the general version and the original? ( i've read the original to the last current chapter, and needs some updates
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The difference is that the General version has the clop bits removed for readers that don't like that stuff. Also, I tinkered with parts to make the flow of the chapter run better than the original, but otherwise is kept pretty much the same. The bigger reason I am doing this is because this story is going to be released as a audio drama and the clop bits were going to be very awkard for them to perform.
This is an unusual paragraph. I'm curious how quickly you can find out what is so unusual about it. It looks so plain you would think nothing was wrong with it. In fact, nothing is wrong with it! It is unusual though. Study it, and think about it, but you still may not find anything odd. But if you work at it a bit, you might find out.
What is unusual on this?
All ready written.
I don't see much point to this for those who've already read the original. Toning down sex in future chapters, or working to make them more seperate from the main story is one thing, but this... Nah. I'll stick with the original.
I really like having a version of this story I can fav and upvote in good conscience!
Please continue it?
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you'll wear yourself out trying to accommodate everyone. There's the "sex" tag, and you could put a warning up. But, in the end, it's their choice whether to read it or not. It's not like they can't skim through it and skip over it entirely. And as for the audio drama, it's not like they can't "crop" it out themselves. I'd put that responsibility on them if they're going to put that kind of time and effort into someone else's story.