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well the story's bio seems confusing. Is it about caramels loss? The new family? Finding love? Responsibility of raising a family? If all then it seem like too many things to juggle for one story.
Thanks for the feedback, I updated the bio to make it more clear.
A childbirth is a messy and ugly bussiness. The infant that come out also tend to be ugly...What we see on TV are at least 3-6 months old children. And the mother is unlikely to have much strength after that to do much beside straight up sleeping.
7478841 Yep. Been there experienced that. I could have gone into hyper realism, but I didn't think a lot of readers wanted to experience the full 36 hours of screams and waiting that goes with a birthing.
Thanks for the comment, your the first to do so since I started writing this story.
Can't believe no one have posted something like this yet.
Fun fact: Hymen is not the indication of virginity even biologically speaking.
It can be tear earlier in life by some random activities.
There might be a medical condition that require one to cut the hymen away.
It might not be the type of hymen that formed a barrier.
It might not even be there at all.
7479568 Another fun fact. Horses and ponies don't have a hymen. I debated with myself as to whether or not she would have one, I decided to put it in, because it humanized them and made them more relatable to the readers.
On another point, I decided to not have them have a estrous cycle, but instead have something akin to a menstrual cycle. They will still have eleven mouths of pregnancy though.
you misused "pour", It was supposed to be "poor" at many parts.
You misused 'haft' a lot too. It was supposed to be 'have' or 'has' most of the time.
Can't wait too see how you pull Blueberry's brother and father down from their fortress and into the Roman gladiator pit in the middle of a deathmatch.
Wonder which method you will use, Law and Order or Rule of Nature.