i prefer reading crossover stories, and i am just starting my first fanfiction (for MLP FiM) and i would like some opinions on it
When a mass breakout occcurs in the world of hero factory, and the black hole sends the villians to equestria, the heroes, the mane six, and several other ponies must work together in order to save equestria from the villains who are now causing trouble in equestria.
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This better update soon or.......
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it will, im just working on setting the the event that get the villians there in motion, expect in about 3 days or less
993884 That's alot better than other stories I'm reading, one of them took 6 months to update.
Nice to see a crossover that didn’t start because of:
1. Twilights shady new teleportation spell
2. Discords fooling around again
3. It’s a Royal Canterlot conspiracy
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Templates like that are forrbidden
Now things get interesting.
Aw buck.
He named the core remover 'Pinchy.'
Wow.
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I KNOW RIGHT!?!
Doesn't matter if you're a robot. Being used as a battering ram hurts. A lot.
Good chapter.
Changelings and Villains. This can't be good.
YAY!!! Update!
Woot! Story update!
MOAR
Encore! Encore!
Also: Maybe you should put "other" as one of the character tags to account for the Heroes and villains.
Things went from bad to -
worse?
No, annoying.
Yay, update!
Sorry I was very late on this.
I only just got to it.
Whoo Hoo
a Hero Factory/My Little Pony crossover!
One thing i am suprised with is the introduction of technology with the ponies.
Will we be seeing a fire villains or savage planet villains or revealing the background of these villains?
3543499 sorry for the ridiculously late reply. writer's block, schoolwork, and other assorted issues that I don't have the patience to explain does not a happy pony make
to answer you...
Yes, There are going to be Fire Villains, all of them
For savage planet, Witch doctor And Fangz are confirmed, I haven't picked out a place or time for them yet.
That villain background idea is nice, but I can only think of one villain *coughblackphantomcough* where it would be useful *coughsuicideplanWTH?cough* without causing a 'every time a fight starts someone has a flashback' syndrome.
and though you didn't ask...
I will somehow work in Brain attack (or at least the villains, and some hero designs) but NOT invasion from below
how would I explain a giant mecha anyway?
edit: oh right tech!
you know those ridiculously oversized computers from before the 1980-something's?
Yeah, the teleporter however... erm... I'm going to have to explain that...without redoing work...or taking away from the story
You have my attention, and nice self insert!
Interesting..., Thunder helped a hero by pretty much giving him a hint that he was about to get sniped.
Bet that's gonna shorten his sentence a lot more!
That bored scream thoh.
For some reason Core Hunter reminds me more of Diesel 10 since he called his claw Pinchy.