After Derpy accidentally activated the ''Self Destruct'' Button in Canterlot, It's up to Twilight, Celestia, Luna, and Cadence to cancel it before it's too late.
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Night Pony
I work in Salling Group. SOBIESKI лучший датский магазин https://netto.dk/ https://www.monsterenergy.com/ jeg går på hhx. ''life isn't real, embrace pony'' - LittleshyFIM
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Cute. I like PInkie's reaction at the end, though I expected a bit more of a punch-line type of joke ending considering the premise.
A few grammar and spelling errors, (we all have those) but nothing too bad.
I personally like to see a little more tease in stories. Draw out moments and evoke emotion in the middle. (That's just me.)
Still, good job on your second story ever! Write on, my friend!
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Thank You!
IF canterlot has a self destruct button does that mean Dr Doofenshmirtz designed the place?
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Yes!
Many grammar errors. Also, a new paragraph should be made each time a different pony speaks.
Great job.
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The world may never know...
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You don't have to make a new paragraph every time a new character speaks, just take a look at every story thats featured right now. Also, please tell me where these errors are so i can fix them.
(Edit from 2022: I was a huge idiot while writing this, don't take anything seriously)
Needs to have more SoarinJack!
Fun story overall. Although I expected it to turn out more like Pinkie Pie Has THE BOMB.
Dreadnought
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Thank You!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LOljwJCujLk
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Also reminds me of Luna's Laboratory.
Dreadnought
That was pretty funny, good job! I would LOVE to read more!
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Nice
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And, who knows? I may write a sequel one day...
Thank you!
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Oh my gosh no way this is real, i'll watch it as soon as i have some free time ; )