Huh.... honestly, this wasn't as bad as other vore fics go.
I enjoyed "Twilight" chapter more-so than the other two.

1st chapter: Damn. For the Princess of Love, Cadence was kinda cruel in this story. And I actually found myself enjoying it.

2nd chapter: Aww, Twilight is best gentle giantess. Although I still prefer Applejack to her.

3rd chapter: Wow. Talk about a major eclipse, and those poor humans got a firsthand experience.

You wouldn't happen to have a sequel in mind would you? Perhaps a story where the rest of the mane cast all get their own tinies?

Don't mind too much the negative votes
Usually people dislike stories that contain vores and so.
I'm not a great fan of vore fics honestly, so I enjoyed more twilight's chapter, but the story itself is enjoyable, good work

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Thanks! I know it wasn't as good as my previous story. I may have noticed that I'm not as good at describing vore as much as I initially thought, so I might stick to the other sexual kinks like I did for Twilight's chapter.

Really nice work.