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I hope you enjoy my blend of stories with a dash of innovation to spice things up.

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8646865
I, nor did anybody else, force you to read this, if you're feeling appalled by this story, you really have nobody else to blame but yourself. And isn't this in the same group with this type of weirdness that you joined?

8646875
I wasn't knocking the story. It was more a gif to represent my reaction to the tags. I saw it posted in futaquestria and thought I was getting run of the mill 'sexquestria' story, where everyone's a futa and I get a quick fap. Believe it or not I wasn't turned away from the tags, hell, it'd be hypocritical if I did as I too have done cock vore (A weird night.) If there was a tag that did 'turn' me away from reading this fiction it'd the

death of a certain yellow pegasus,

I'm not judging you or the work in anyway. I just wanted to leave a funny gif and go. I meant no offense. Keep on doing you, hombre. :twilightsmile:

8646889
Oh, sorry for the misunderstanding, and I understand why you thought that this was a run of the mill 'sexquestria' story, it's basically 95% of the group.

8646895
Well there'd be no point in making a character a futa unless you intend for them to use their new cajonies, right? Well, glad we got that misunderstanding smoothed over. Keep on making fics, dude. See ya. :twilightsmile:

8646900
I guess you're right. And I definitely will.

Alright that's it, why are you guys disliking my story, why can't you man up and tell me right now why you can't back up your opinion? I'm not mad because you're disliking it, I'm mad because you're not telling me why. Are you salty because I killed your waifu? Or is it because you don't like vore? Or is it because the vore scene was too short or sloppy? Which one is it? I want to know so I can try to not mess up the next time.

Thanks for the content warnings, and good luck with the story!
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Well, when it comes to me, I love to see the inside. Watching a pony melted down slowly and sensually gets me hard real quick.

8647177
You make a few great points, but saying that clop only appeals to 1% of the fandom is just straight up wrong on more than one level, unless you meant the cock-vore part. And I see your point too, I do sound kind of rude and it is strange that I put it in the comment section rather than the author's note, I'll take that into account next time.

And I also understand why people won't like this, I usually understand why people won't like my stories, especially my one-shots since the feel rushed and even I have to admit, I could do better, but those one-shots always had an even amount of downvotes and upvotes, or if they didn't, the downvotes was only one or two more than the upvotes, here, like 14+ people disliked it, and I would just to like to know why they didn't like it other than the fetish. There had to be another reason, right? It's just that they don't want to either because they're too lazy or they're trolls. But I understand what you mean and get your point. Thanks for replying to my comment.

8647164
Okay, I'l be sure to include that next story.

Nice touch with the skull

8647177

You posted hard vore

Dude, it's not hard vore, it's one of the varieties of soft vore.

This came off as very comedic to me and honestly (while I'm not into the fetish material) I liked it a lot.

8647177

You posted Hard Vore (Fatal)

Hold up a second... Now I'm gonna let ya finish but first I Gotta learn ya a thing.

I've been writing Vore Stories for a couple years now. (Not here mind you because I don't enjoy marshmallows) but allow me to enlighten you on something I've learned in my four+ years of writing vore.

Hard Vore in no way means that it sticks to simply fatal, while yes fatality is heavily implied in hard vore it is by no means the same thing as simply being fatal... There are some twisted tales I could tell you sir/madam/other.

Hard Vore is best summed up as Realistic Consumption involving but not limited too, cooking, cutting, biting, etc. Of the prey pre-injestion. You see a Lion take down a gazelle and start eating it? That's vanilla hard vore.

Soft Vore on the other hand involves the prey in question making it to the digestive recepticle of choice whole, alive, and optionally conscious.

Soft Vore ONLY means the prey isn't dead or mutilated in some way before being eaten. Digestion is it's own seperate ballpark with multiple sub categories.

The style of vore where the prey is consumed but not digested is known as Endosoma. I dunno why but that's the name.

Edit: I made so many edits... It's like it's 1:40AM or something... But had to put all the info in there I could.

Liked it but I wish we could’ve seen her digested

IMa smatch all pon i with club, with regerd thom

Dont delete my shit I want to eat her poop please

8649773
Sorry, but that published chapter was a mistake.

I've given this story a downvote, not for the story's premise or theme but it's god awful pacing! Seriously I understand it's meant to be fetish material but not everyone can get off in two tugs.

And that blink and you miss it pacing is why I've downvoted. It was a decent concept but lacking in execution. 6/10 needs many, many more words

8647177 I actually enjoy vore... but only when it's done well.

Which means I HATE 99% of vore material. Including this extremely feeble attempt at writing.

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8654891
Yeah, my pacing with this story is god-awful, I'm sorry about that.

8655033
Hey don't be discouraged. Once you recognise a problem you can fix it. Never give up!

8655288
I won't, and it mostly has to do with my problem with one-shots, but I think I'm getting better.

8655295
Good to hear!

8655033 Stories need 1. a solid plot that progresses in a meaningful way 2. some semblance of story structure 3. interesting characters the audience can relate to in some fashion. 4. Even in fetish material, you need to have interesting dialog and descriptive writing to make something that will hold an audience's attention.

8655414
Yeah, I agree with you, every story needs everyone of those points.

Its good I jsut don't like the death :/ sorry!~

I like it but I can't help but ponder the story behind the world. It is clear that the ones getting eating do not want it, so I have to wonder if Celestia knows about all this (and even dose some her self) or if she is in the dark.

Well that's just me, I like info and it was a really good start. Hope to see more form this world ;)

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