A little filly by the name of Sweet Treats retells the story of how she met her two new "friends" and the wonderful day they had. However, there is a catch; she's passed away and she doesn't know how to move on.
Will Diamond and Silver help their new friend with their reformed ways and the magic of friendship that a certain purple alicorn and her friends have taught them?
Maybe.
But Sweet Treats is going to cause some harmless and spooky mischief on her new friends first.
this was written in collaberation with NightwatchTheRouge as the co-auther
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That was awesome!
I'm soo looking forward to this.
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thank you glad you enjoy it
That was adorably terrifying. I loved it.
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im glad to hear that
I wanna sequel...... because you totally don't have a billion other things to worry about, nope not at all, not one bit
That ending sounds as if this is just the prologue but I think it was a one-shot right? Well I liked it, I think it was really good. Maybe you make it focus on comedy and slice of life or something.
Not sure if that would work, but maybe you put her soul in a body of a stillborn, in the story itself, but maybe let it be a single mother or make them a really caring and nice couple. Of course they would need to get explained the possibility and I would probably like to see them acting wary about it and stuff.
i want a normal caring dad this time, not sure what I'm expecting again, but I can't stop myself from expecting the worst here sometimes.#
edit: I will see how I think about it in a week, but for now I put it in my favourites since i got a good mood from it.
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well i'm glad you liked it and it was a prologue in a way as it was one of the first things my current editor and I worked on together so we where testing the waters to see how well we mixed
Cute story. Is there a follow-up?
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Never thought about making one
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Ah ok. Pity, I rather this character and the humor.
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I'll give it some thought but no promises