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Viper Pit


im not the best writer but I'm proud of every story I make some more then others tho Also I would love to do crossover's they are so much fun

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Rumble's daughter comes home one day and asks where her mother is. So Rumble decides to cheer her up with the story of how he met her mother. Well not really he just tells her about how they got married and had her leaving out some details not suited for her young ears.


inspired by Little mare Big family

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Comments ( 31 )

Good story for your first try on it. You should fix the link.

8564131
thanks and i'll see what i can do about the link

I’m glad I could help with this. :twilightsmile:

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and i thankful for your help

This story, holy wow, I told myself I wouldn't cry, but here I am sobing like a baby, well done.:fluttercry:

She couldn't do a C_section?

*Stares in saddened anger*

I have a hard time finding this will to read a story when there are blatant grammatical errors in the short description.

This is a truly touching story, and really pulling on my heart. It's sad to imagine seeing your wife/husband image everyday on your child, but also great blessing.

This story got my like and favorite.

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to be honest i forgot about that

I love grimdark stories but this is too much to take in!

8564332
that a good thing?

It means It is too sad:applecry:!

Scoots death in Rainbow Factory was way more HAPPY:pinkiecrazy

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so it is a good thing

NO YOUR STORY IS TOO SAD

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which is what i was aiming for lol

RIP Scootaloo. You will always be loved.

But, asking completely seriously, did they try for a caeserean? That's what they had to do when my mum had me. Like in this case, I was physically too big to allow for a natural birth.

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they did she died from compications during the process

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An example of truth echoing life, that nearly happened to my mum. That's why I found reading this so painful-I was very nearly in River's position. Nontheless, this was a good read. I often find a mix of happy and sad fics to help me.

9196314
Apologies, that last sentence made no sense.

So sad and nice, and beautiful.

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One question: Can I translate your story on Russian and publish on Russian version of Fimfiction please? Of course, I will point out that you are the author of this work.

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Glad you liked it

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