The link is broken?

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-Omega

I was under the impression this ended a while ago? Oh well, it wrapped things up at least.

3001019 Yeah I kinda forgot to publish that last bit so it was just sorta.....sitting there.

well this certainly was a bit of a surprise, an update after forever
though it does close this story quite nicely (although some arcs are still missing... ah well, what can we do lol)

Yes, relax :3

*tackles Omega* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AN UPDATE ON MY MOST FAVORITE OF ALL FIMFICS....AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA Wait...comments....WRAPPED UP?! *flails* You're not ending this are you?

3160159 'Merica!

3391509 lol glad to hear it.

I am so glad I finally got to finishing this story. I give it a A+++

cant wait for the next one. and for anyone who really loves a good book; A sequel!

3428164 Sequel exists.
Check the story "Hey Handsome."

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I cant explain how much i fucking enjoyed this story, I maronthed it over about 6 hrs :0 but I enjoyed it thourghly, I already rated it so you can find it in my previous comment, I dont even think this is going to be a rant (hopefu- Dammit, it begins) the only problems I had were the spelling (expected of course) and the ending, now before you hate on me, let me explain, I fell like these were my main issues: First, the stuff with Fluttershy with was never FULLY resolved (for lack of a better word) lik

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like Im a big fan of FlutterMac, so I think it would be cool if she realised that Seethe wasnt right for her and found someone else *cough cough Big Mac *cough cough (I know it talked about that in the story but it was brief and just said it didnt work out for awhile, but that can be reversed).
Second, all the Seethes from altenate universes issue was never resolved (again, for lack of a better word) its not that super major, but come on, its just like there, staring at you in the face, so yea. Third, pretty much the same as the Alternate Seethes thing, The Destiny, you cant bring in alien ponies, shroud them in mystery, reveal them as legit characters with personalties... and then throw them into the background, just come on....
Fourth, I just felt this story just couldve been longer, wi

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with all these issues not well, resolved (Again, for la- forget it, you get the point by now) it just couldve been longer (and in my opinion if this was longer, it couldve been longer, then it wouldve been better) Now, before you say theres a sequel, thats a completely different story, even if it still has Seethe and Celestia, its in different context, so not the same story (obviously) Fifth: More clop, and before you call me a disgusting horse fucker or just hate on me, let me explain, earlier on in the story, the amount of clop was perfect, not to much and not to little, but later in the story, you mostly stopped it, clop isint just for sexual gratification (although, partially, it is) its another element to the story, it made it more interesting and (exciting?) again, just a suggestion. And finally the Sixth suggestion, different variations (ok, so this is mostly a suggestion, Edit: DEMAND) Ok, so I think it would be cool if you wrote variations of the story like a LunaxOC version with Seethe and Celestia as side characters, or a FlutterMac with the same concept, (with Seethe and Celestia as side characters, not like BigMac as a comedian, just... no) I think that would be cool, or just elaborate on this story more (even though theres a sequel, I already explained that and its teen whats the fun in that? ;)
Well, thats all my "issues" with this overall EPIC, AWESOME, FABULOUS, GLORIOUS (running out of adjectives) GREAT, AND FANTASTIC story, but you cant please everyone can you? Well thats about it, it makes me sad though, that you'll probably never read these comments, the "newest" comments were posted over a year ago for Christ's sake! Wow, I realised just jow many comments and words i wrote, it could probably be a seperate story lol, anyways, in the case that you DO read these comments (still doubtful) that youll consider adding on or making a side story for my "issues" especially the variation suggestion (EDIT: demand) I REALLY love the idea of a Luna version (Ive said that too much havent I?) Well anyways, Cheers Mate/Nate (<-teehee) for a _______ (<-had to many positive adjectives for the website) story i LOVED it, I'll redo the rating because its probably lost in my meangingless rants (literally meaningless, the story was already comoleted by point, including this one *facehoof) ANYWAYS
Overall Rating: INFINITE /10
Well Mate/Nate It was an INCREDIBLE ride (new adjective yay) and I just wanted to congragulate you on this masterpiece and all the time and effort you put into this "project" (even if you dont read this) you are a great author and i also want to apologize for this rant (and said it probably wouldnt be one *facehoof x2) and for repeating/nagging certain things ( MAKE A LUNA VERSION PLEASE )
Anyways, Cheers man, and Thank You for this EPIC experience (brohoof inbound ->) /)