Luna makes me do too much paperwork :(
Trixie has never been nice to really any pony.
"It's a psychological protection system, designed to protect her ego."
After a few days of bad or worse luck, Trixie nearly starves, but is taken in by a protective doctor, who recently lost his wife to disease, his heart searching for love, he tried to look for love in Trixie.
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1696599 It's always someone!
6 likes and 0 views?
1696644 Lol. Didn't realize that was possible
Try reloading the page, it for me, now says 9 views.
I think I will have to see what this turns into, I like it so far, but I don't really like trixie...
Some errors, but I've seen worse. I will wait to see what this turns into.
1696656 What kind of errors have you seen? Grammar, spelling, punctuation? I didn't give the first chapter much of a read over, so I was expecting maybe to miss one or two.
Not bad, but not the best I have ever read. However, I can't judge from just this short of a chapter. I am going to favorite to see how this develops.
1696651 lol no worries, just found it funny
Anyways, time to check it out
1696668 Thanks for the chance, much appreciated.
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There's always read-later button!
You know, so it's saved for ya but not considered a favorite?
... I gotta stop over-explaining things like people I talk to are stupid...
There is so much unbridled, pure talent on this website it blows my mind.
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Nice beginning, but I saw a few errors. dieing=>dying every time you spelled that word, it was incorrect, in the second to last paragraph, there was that first h that wasn't capital, and something else I cant remember (maybe). good story though, I will be looking at this. seems pretty good so far.
Not bad at all, I do feel bad for Trixie sometimes. She's gonna be fine...
Oh Ponyville has two l's just fyi.
1696717 I know, I read it, and liked it!
This was a good story so far,and I only saw a couple of mistakes. BTW, It's not lack of hunger, it's lack of food
1696599 You could get banned for saying that. Just sayin
1696734 What an appropriate gif!
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I noticed one sentence that did not start with a capital letter. I literally copied directly from the story with this:
he quickly opened the door and dragged the half-dead mare inside.
This was the second to last paragraph. Hope this helps
I'll admit it, I'm a sucker for a good Trixie Redemption story.
I really hope established cannon isn't portraying Trixie as an evil character, because that would be just cruel.
I find it hard to believe that nopony in Ponyville would have shown any compassion to a starving, dying mare. She is in Ponyville, isn't she?
Hmm. Quite the concept there.
Will follow out of sheer curiosity, but I must agree with the others: There are a few noticeable spelling and grammar issues. Keep it up, though!
"SPRING DANCER FUCK OFF AND GO TO YOUR ROOM ALREADY, GAWL."
Seriously, what the hell, dad character?
1696664 Dieing is spelled dying, and ponies don't shake from "lack" of hunger, they shake from hunger / lack of food.
1696605 I was late to the party, but I was the life of it.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Trixie_lolface_1.png
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This I like this very much
Hmm,
I shall continue to follow this story
169803 *FACEHOOF* How did I do that.
I don't know why, but this made me laugh for about 15 seconds. I like it so far, keep up the good work!
Still sweet.
Trixies a little agressive isn't she?
it's good short but good
This is definitely going to be weird in the beginning. And Trixie hasn't meet his daughter yet. I look forward to the next chapter.
Pretty good, but I think it was a little too rushed between the two of them. Please continue though!
I like it! C:
Yay a non-"Trixie is a nonredeemable sack of crap who deserves as much punishment as possible" story!
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1697047 that kind of comment does help. Thanks!
MOAR! MOAR MOAR MOAR! Dis good!
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1720769 I think I've seen that GIF before. And I'm making slow progress on the next part.
Eh, I've been working on my prologue of my first story and I'm STILL not finished.
But that's writing. Can't wait for the next update!
The irony of reading this today right now is that the moment I read that last line, I saw an addvertisement stating 3 ways to lose your body fat. Now I just have to find some way to post that picture here... Photobucket any good?
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5 out of 5 moustaches
Very touching.
Oh man, getting deeper into the characters' backgrounds, one of the most touching parts of a story…
This is getting good //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_beam.png
OH THE FEELS!!!!
When can we get a new chapter?
Read this one too. YOU ARE A GOD(in a matter of speaking)! My friend loves trixie! I bet he'd love this one too!
2298736 Really? Well I haven't been on FIMfiction as much lately but I'm going to try and start back up soon. I've been working on some small ideas for novels and such, getting my school work in check *GRADES WERE GOIN' \/ FAST*, and managing a BronyXPegasister relationship.
A bit too quick, I think.
Besides, like and fav