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great work as always love the chapter![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Oh and
First!XD
This was the exact scene as she read out the spell to him:
"Trust me, it won't hurt at all!"
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Great chapter as usual! GG SEETHE!![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
Nice Troll Celestia
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948504 Indeed![:ajsmug:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsmug.png)
Awwww did that hurt?Sowwy!*snap of a oversized as fuck glove comes out of no where*![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
Really, Scarlet Sheen?
Anger management therapist?
1116881 Charlie Sheen.
Anger Management
1116904
Nice to know I'm not the only one that likes the show.
Pretty good, but you might want to cut down on the describing the key part, all the times you said the word just makes it seems kind of strange.
Maybe you can change it to something along the lines of.
It formed a small, golden, transparent, key. The key gently moved into the lock on top of the metal door. It twisted to my right unlocking the first lock. Then the key extracted itself and then reformed into a differently shaped key. There were 3 locks on the metal door. The second key was larger than the first, so the magical aura changed in size too. It went gently into the next lock, turned and was extracted. It finally took the final shape, now of sort of a very small key. Much smaller than even the first.
to
"I formed a magical aura, which I then shaped into the golden silhouette of an average looking key which I then inserted it into the door, undoing the first of the three protective locks on the door. I repeated the process twice more, the second key slightly bigger then the first, and the third being smaller then even the average sized first key."
1117375 I guess I will change it. I'll take a look sometime later tonight and see what I can change.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
wow epic funniness![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
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Trust me I be a doctor.
Am i the only one who thought that?
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"He didn't just talk about one of the world's most awesome people didn't he ?"