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Feeling Grand


I don't know really, I like MLP, so I thought I might as well sign up

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Rainbow Dash is in a hurry, flying at her usual unfathomable speed. But then she starts to hear beeping and looks back, seeing the police are on her tail.

She looks behind her, seeing that with all her urgency, the police have an urgency of their own. To capture her and make her pay the price for breaking the law.

Good thing she has the help of a friend to help her learn her lesson well.

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A few grammatical errors stopped my flow when reading. This was silly and out there but I like silly and out there. I like having to guess what the friendship lesson was. A bit short but I still enjoyed it.

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Thanks for the review. Yeah, Grammar will be the bane of me. I took an online course and everything. At least I've got more of a grapple on it than what I did four years ago.

Word of advice, Rainbow, whenever a cop pulls you over, say this:

Then make a break for it while they're confused. It very rarely works!

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