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Collins4112


I'm a recently found brony. I didn't think much of the show untill I watches it as a joke, then I was hooked

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Soarin'. The captain of the Wonderbolts and bachelor. He is rich, good looking, and is great with the mares, but he is soon to have a new problem to deal with.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 44 )

Oh damn... Ima favorite this and see where it goes :twilightsmile:

Oh wow, it was pretty dull to dredge through until that ending, poor Soarin.

Ditto what HeartBeat said :D

nicely written. Not going to fave this just yet, imma see where this goes. I have my ways of tracking things...:ajsmug:

I like it. Strong introduction. Keep the chapters coming

Welp. Soarin's life just went for a spin.

The story is good but the writing style really lets it down. You write in a "he did this, he did that and then this happened" manner. It plays itself out more like a verbal recount rather than a story, and it just isnt very engaging to read. My advice: "show, don't tell".

Shit, that's a real sucker punch at the end :derpyderp2:
Fly like the wind, Soarin'. You don't need any strings attached.
But I suppose if he takes his nights with others often, it was inevitable :trixieshiftright:

I don't know where this is going, but i like it. :rainbowkiss:

Soarin' shouldn't be suprised. If you sleep around a lot, you're probably going to end up having a bastard.

Mannn so far so good, you never disappoint! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Watching so hard. Can't wait for the baby mama drama!!! :rainbowlaugh:

And that my friends, is why making a habit of one night stands is NOT a smart idea :3

Well, thanks to the Mayor's... persuasive... arguement, Soarin' has a kid.

And let it be known that while I find his attitude to be obnoxiously snotty, I do like how you've put it in; it makes for a completely new approach to a story involving him.

I agree with iEspeon about his attitude :pinkiecrazy:

Soarin's a total turd in this fic! Nice for a change :rainbowlaugh:

I hope he gets straightened out.

Lol, Soarin' is such a hoe. :rainbowkiss:

909592 always bring protection..........if they actually have it in equestria at all

917485 yea they do "One thing led to another and I had slept with her on my visit to Ponyville, and as I recalled she told me to 'unleash the beast' (In other words, I didn't wear a condom)."

lolsoya

I love you so much right now dude.

I just finished reading the gentle red series.

and then I read this.

You are motherfucking amazing.

Good show! :moustache:

Also, FIRST! :pinkiehappy:

92774 I enjoyed that very much:rainbowlaugh:

Can you please stop calling him a bastard? Please? Ans Soarin' is being a jerkoff, lol.

Whoa, random changeling attack. Will we find out why the changelings were interested in Soarins son? Though it was a pretty cool chase. GO Little Wings! Show that changeling who's boss! Who's your daddy!?...oh right Soarin is...

I kind of guess he was going to keep him.:rainbowderp: Still good, keep it up.:ajsmug:

you never cease to amaze me.

Being woken up in the middle of the night is starting to sound pretty good, huh?

Good Soarin', Good! :pinkiehappy:

Well, that was unexpected.

I hope that there's a good reason for the changelings, otherwise they just seem like a cheap plot device for introducing some random conflict and getting Soarin to realize that he wants his son.

you know, i really like this story o.o
but wonder what dashies role will be here

Soarin' was robbed!

There can't be leather couches because they would have to kill cows. How about silk instead?

989842 i took your suggestion and changed it

I don't like Rosemary's dad... :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

I really fucking love you.


990485 And Rosemary's dad has a reason to be pissed

998411 Lol what don't you like about him?

999070 Honestly, I'm not sure. But I have a sort of 6th sense for people like or similar to that. I can tell who they are just by looking at them, hearing a conversation, or just plain reading about them. It's weird, hearing me say that, am I right? But what's even more weird is that I'm telling the truth. :pinkiegasp::yay: Let's see, the people include:
Douchebags
egotistical maniacs
Over-protective parents/grand-parents
And people who should generally just do the world a favor, and die.
I'm just fueling your idea that i'm mentally challenged, aren't i? Well, i was dropped on my head a lot as a kid, so i think i am too, but im still sane enough to know it. :pinkiecrazy::rainbowhuh:

999454 Haha you don't sound mental. That actually makes you sound smart.

whelp, sucks to be him... i wonder who the mother is since i dont see soarin hooking up with mayor mare?
anywho, interesting idea, im curious as to what will unfold...:eeyup:

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