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GivingSpider


"Any religion that allows or commands you to pass judgement on, convert by force, or kill another human being is not a religion that serves any interpretation of any God or Gods above." Unknown

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Discord has been trapped in stone along with all the chaos he tried to spread across Equestria. The only remaining free spark of his power resides in his heir. Screwball spent countless years evading the ever watchful eyes of the realm but grew bored of hiding her true self.
Boredom turned into spite.
Spite turned into a plan.
Then she got hungry, had a sandwich, and then she got to work.

A short belated birthday gift for my dear friend, Fluttercord45

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 6 )

Awesome start. Keep going and don't give up. You've got a good story :scootangel:

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Thank you for reading and for commenting...but this was one-shot:twilightblush:

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Ah well!! No worries. If you plan on making a story to continue you can apply the advice there I guess lol :derpytongue2:

This has been a very interesting and amusing read :ajsmug: I really like the Chaos Magic lore, the focus on Screwball and her thoughts, as well as the bits of randomness. Your style of writing descriptions is rather unusual and... Uh, specific? It’s hard to name it :derpytongue2: It flows a little strangely at first, but once the reader gets a grasp of it, it is alright.

OH! Was that a reference to Dune I saw there? Ha, ha, ha, wonderful. This story is definitely Daughter of Discord worthy fanon. I wonder what Rainbow Dash is going to think if she finds out Pegasi are no longer alone in the sky.

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Yes. Yes it was a Dune reference you saw.:yay:

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