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Unicorncob


A snarky Irishman who likes making words happen. Princess Discord is best pony.

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The Cutie Mark Crusaders are given an assignment to complete during the autumn break; to write an essay on a scary legend.

Preparing to visit Hollow Shades for a while, will they find a myth? Or will there be truth to the stories...


Just barely managed to finish this in time! It's probably not that good but I hope you all enjoy it!

Happy Halloween/Nightmare Night!

Chapters (17)
Comments ( 4 )

Ooh, this is interesting so far :>

There are some formatting issues here - mainly, the paragraphs are kind of lumped together. When you're using double-spacing, the convention is for paragraphs to be spaced

out

like

this

because when they're lumped together, it makes it a bit harder to read (for reference, see https://www.fimfiction.net/writing-guide#Paragraph-spacing). However, I'm intrigued by what I've read so far and hope to pick this back up soon :)

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I did have formatting for the paragraphs but unfortunately Fimfiction removed them :c

Glad you like it though! :yay:

This was a fun story. Nice work.

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