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Prince Luna


Dedicated writer who loves to work and think of new ideas. I hope you like my fanfics - my readers are very precious to me!

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In the magical kingdom of Maneia, unicorns are the dominant species because of their special magical powers; this leads to unicorns teaming up to make guilds of wizards. These guilds go on quests to help others in the world. When Rarity, an extravangant and careful unicorn decides to join a guild, she turns to her old friend Twilight Sparkle, who is a member of the number one guild in the kingdom; Pony Tail. Together and with Lyra Heartstrings and Shining Armor, the guild strives to help ponies in need of help across the kingdom.
You don't have to have watched Fairy Tail to read this! It's written as if I had made the themes myself!
Comes with it's own opening theme!

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Comments ( 19 )

Long time no see and this is a read for me!

LET'S DO THIS!

wait does this take place in mainia? as in seagorathes place?

948303 I have never heard of that :rainbowlaugh: nah this is my own made up land :twilightsmile:

Was it ever verified that Starswirl the bearded was dead?

948336 it was implied that he was. But it isn't canon if he is or isn't.

Now onto the story, it's very good so far and can't wait to see more. Will give a more detailed review once more of the story has been released.

The ending part seemed a bit... rushed, to be honest. Too simple/easy for her to get in. And... really? Making Rares and Twi best friends, to an extent, but she doesn't know about Twi's BBBFF? That... That's just messed up, IMO. Still going to read, but felt that you should be made aware...

953035 Hey that makes it similar to the show then i mean did anyone know about the BBBFF untill the last 2 episodes?

955617 Umm... That's KINDA the point of a crossover... That it mixes the two things together. And what does 'not finding out' about the BBBFF until the last two episodes have ANYTHING to do with this? This was posted JULY 21, over THREE MONTHS past the season finale. Anyone who DOESN'T know about the finale is a moron. And what I'm saying is odd, in case you missed it, was that Twi, apparently, never mentioned her older brother to Rarity at ALL, despite being friends growing up. I mean, come on. How do you NOT know about a friend's siblings if you're friends for YEARS... ~_~

955966 Lets see,

First of all in the show after living in Ponyville for almost 2 years and making countless trips to canterlot Shining Armor was never mentioned once. Not even in her flashback during S1 Episode 23 did Twilight mention him. So it would make sense that her brother hadn't been mentioned. I mean he is the captain of the royal guard so he should have been there since episode 1 when celestia came to Ponyville for the summer sun festival. I mean not only was the only Princess (at the time), the ruler of the entire land of equestria there, but so was his little sister.

Second of all, since you made a big point of this being KINDA a crossover, if you have actually watched or read the anime/manga Fairy Tail, (which this is based off of FYI) you would know that everyone in the guild has their own secrets that no one else knows. Even the friends and family from before their time in the guild, not every one knew about it. The whole theme of the show is secret pasts and character backstories. So obviously there has to be secrets between the members of the guild.

Third, does it really matter when the story was made? I mean in this story Shining Armor might not even be married to Cadence let alone even have met her. People were writing stories about the wedding from the day it was announced a month prior to its air date. Besides this could be a writers interpetation of the series. What if they decide to make it so that Shining left before twilight was born or when she was a little filly and she didn't remember him. Ever think of it that way? When it comes to writing crossovers there are a million things you can do to a story no matter what it is or what the original story was.

958970 That last reason is about one of the only answers I'd accept, honestly. Sorry, but something like siblings is kinda important to me. (Unless I'm mis-remembering already, they said that in this one, Rarity and Twilight are best friends since childhood. I just... Don't see how they could be BEST friends and have that NOT come up at some point. (What happened in the show is irrelevant. I'm making a big deal about this because of what all has changed, and how those differences should have impacted other things.)

960067 You should wait for them to explain the story more because there may be a backstory behind this because it is a fairy tail crossover and like i said before fairy tail is all about backstories. Maybe there is a Cana and Gildarts style backstory to thier pasts and shining never even knew that she esxisted or a story like what is happening in the anime now where Lucy finds out she has a cousin that she played with as a baby and just had no memory of her.

960067>>960582 Pay attention guys, Rarity has read magazines about Shining Armor in her wizard training, she knew he exists but didn't know he was Twilight's brother. I'll go into some depth in the next chapter since it's sort of a character introduction chapter to clear up and make some new details.
Basically and in the least spoilery way possible, Shining Armor did not live in Trottingham for enough time for Rarity to notice since she was young; then he was questing most of his time with Mana Spark. To the present time, Twilight had only joined the guild in recent years which obviously shows she only had a late interest like Rarity and therefore would not get too involved with her brother in the past, and since he was away when Rarity could notice, the mare didn't know about his and Twilight's connection because neither of them were interested in wizardry at first and there was rarely a chance for it to be brought up.
Hope this shed soem light, I can make it clearer and whatnot in the next chapter which I am currently planning. (I've been away for the week, sorry!)

983405 So it is pretty much the same way Lucy would admire Mirajane in the magazines even though she didnt know much about her

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