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I feel like I have a huge responsibility now. I have found Applejack, collapsed in a forest on my Duke of Edinburgh practise. As a brony I was easily able to introduce myself to her and make friends, but now we have to find the others; but time is running out. I'm going home later today and the ponies are probably all here in Wales. I need to find them all to save them. What do I do?
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Yyyeah, I couldn't have said it better myself. This story starts off slow, but I'm really enjoying it. I'm hoping, however, that you will provide an explanation for how AJ (and presumably, the others) wound up in the UK.
Faved and liked!
In-ter-es-ting story.
Maybe this will be the first good Pony on Earth story I'll get to read.
Quick! Say it's a side effect to your magic or something like that! She must not know the truth!
Anyways, liking this so far! It's not too self fantasy serving, which I like the most! I eagerly await the next segment of this fine looking story.
Story seems good so far. Keep it up. Better than My Little Dashie for sure, but that's not saying much. Also, his phone stayed charged for three days?
750338 You don't tend to use your phone when walking constantly
I believe that thing at the end there can be described with a certain link.
Very cool. Found this story when looking for a group to put my 2nd person pony on earth fic. My god i'm so slow on writting it...
I mean, this looks intresting! will read later. It's 6 am, did not sleep
From what I've seen so far, I think the Comedy tag should be added to this story
757427 I dunno about you but my feet being covered in popped blisters searing with pain every tiny step I take when I'm at least five meters behind the rest of my group in the mud and rain in a forest with only a map to guide us fifteen kilometers to our destination isn't funny.
But don't worry, there will be some comedy along the way.
757621 It was Applejack's reaction to Luke's ringtone, I thought that was hilarious. And I was thinking about what the Mane 6's reaction would be when they hear that they are on a T.V show in the human world and that we are watching what they do in Equestria
Lol ring tone! So if he had that ring tone would it mean his friends knew he liked my little pony?
761828 I'm a VERY open brony :P
Now that that's outta my system, good story! But... there are some issues. You kind of go by many parts way to fast. Finding applejack was really rushed though Fluttershy hardly had an introduction at all. You should show how they communicate to one another. You should put more details of how they interact with things, not just "He did this while that was happening and we did that about it." if you know what i mean. I mean it took me a second to realize that the dots were in the real world and not the iphone itself.
Don't get me wrong though, this story has potential, it just seems a bit to rushed with this chapter