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Sorry for the wait, life got in the way for a little while. Back on schedule!
Oooh snap! Twilight is going to show why she's the best student ever, you've done it now, Chrysalis!
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Does "back on schedule," mean you're updating this weekly again?
A special spell?
Asking starlight to teach you a spell is like asking Einstein to build you a firework. If you're lucky, you'll end up with a nice keg of bubbly beer.
Otherwise...
getting away with cheating your spouce? yeah, i'm out
The real surprise here would be if Twilight got Chrysalis pregnant! Her newfound weight might impede her ability to sex up the other ponies.
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A special spell does twilight mean the cutie mark stealing spell? Mind control? Or maybe its her...yeah the emotion storage spell that would work...
twilight has 0 willpower in this story. litteraly all she had to do was stop rarity and explain exactly how much of a liar chrysalis is.
Nice chapter. Can't wait to see what Chrysalis is up to with all her manipulations.
D'awwww, she does care.
Inb4 that prepare something... And it turns out that up until now Chryssie was basically not even trying with her manipulations. And then the shoes are off.
I hope Celestia does something embarrassing to the wretched skittle moose.
I hope Twilight can really stick it to Chrysalis.
I'm cautious but hopeful.
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This is correct.
Strange how things are. I can tolerate and read most fetishs out there, except NTR, because it just disgust me.
Twilight can be inexperienced all she wants in kinky things, but that doesn't excuse anything here.
Here Chrysalis basically got away with willfuly misunderstanding her spouse wish, lying (by omission) to a friend of said spouse to get her wish and emotionaly manipulating everyone to make it stick... And Twilight litteraly stood there and let it stick instead of correcting the situation.
So... Yeah. Not gonna criticize because I know some like this, but this is were I jump off the ship.
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Yeah, not my cup of tea. If Chrysalis tried this and got bitched by Futa-twi or something, living on a leash and the story revolved around Twilight getting used to her new rule as Queen of the Queen of the Changelings, I'd be more willing to look past this. But at this point the only foreshadowing I can see for a way to keep Chrysalis in line is literally emotional manipulation, abusing the fact Chrysalis does genuinely love her which I'm also not okay with.
Either way this is essentially a dominant Chrysalis gets a harem and knocks everyone up story even if Twi is supposed to eventually gain control of her. Not my thing, very little submissive Chrysalis out there. And Twilight let possibly the worst thing just... go without squashing it on the spot. 'You said I could' is no kind of justification and is literally an excuse from people reading and Chrysalis using a legal loophole in the contract due to getting Twilight emotionally flustered enough to say something stupid that she didn't really mean.
So we've got NTR and possible emotional abuse in retaliation instead of nipping the problem in the bud. Not my scene.
Duuuude I was REALLY impatient for the next chapter...
Now I really want Celestia and Luna the real reason of that letter
Yeah, this is one bandwagon I kind of jump on. Chrysalis went from playful to careless of her wife's feelings here. I can buy Cheese Legs doing it easy enough, but Twilight just rolls over when it directly clashes with what has already happened. If Thorax's word is true, and I don't see a reason why he is wrong or a liar, Twilight genuinely loves Chrysalis, so I don't see why she is more concerned over the situation than she is. It's an emotional betrayal that is brushed aside because of logic in a situation driven purely by emotion. Twilight is a logical mare, sure, but she wasn't feeling logic, she was feeling love and the potential for betrayal. That betrayal happened, and she is remarkably okay with it and I have no idea why. I'll give the story another chance but what has just occurred rings of dishonesty.
Ah, Spike's innocence. I wonder when he'll find out what is truly happening.
Luna got literally dragged into a snuggle![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
And Twilight realized that she will help all the help she can get to out-manipulate Chrysalis.![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
While I see that Chrysalis believes that what she does is truly for Twilight's good, she fails to understand that her own perceptions are not 100% lined up with Twilight.
Ah, the joys of not having proper communication. Thanks to that we have a source of entertainment
I just wonder when Chrysalis' manipulation will go so far that it will actually truly hurt Twilight... that won't be pretty.
Both Twilight and Luna, especially Luna, just rolled over and gave up way too easily here in my opinion. Luna goes from 'I would be literally murdering you right now if not for that treaty' to 'oh well I guess she is a good guy after all' simply because Chrysalis calls her beautiful, like it's Luna's secret kill-code or something. It's really odd.
Well, Queen change bug has 2 ponies down, let's see what happens next.
With Luna's past I can understand her pause here and not wanting to go full murder seen, but I hope she doesn't just roll over either.
Eather way I'm interested to see where this all ends up.
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I think you've focused on the wrong word, there.
Can't wait to see what they're up to next,
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What are you doing here guardsman, aren't you support to be on the frontlines or doing something productive with your time; where is your commissar so I may have a word with them
Futa Twilight, incoming.,,
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Clearly you've never heard of crush videos, or two girls one cup...
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Hey. Every fetish is great to SOMEONE.
But we gotta draw the line in the sand, man. Also in the Sandman, but that's a separate issue.
things are about to get interesting
yes.
Love the first line. Very accurate.
So who do you think will be next on the Harem list?
i can easily say this story is amassing.
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this is funny with a good story line and it stays on tract.
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Happy you like it! Expect next chapter soon, I'm trying to go back to a more regular update schedule, I've really been slacking too much.
Cheers!
Keep with the amazing work, and I know is a bit late, but happy 2018 for you
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Never too late for that, happy new year! Let us hope 2018 takes pity on us all!
Also new chapter is done, just undergoing last polishing.
Good heavens... I can be furious for Twilight? I can, right? I'm pretty sure I can, 'cause I am.
So, Chyrsalis turned Luna into Nightmare Moon? Interesting...