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After reading Chase Me by Pusspuss, I can't help but love that stuff too yeah. And I mean, it's Chrysalis, she loves doing that for sure!
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It's only fair to tell you right now: if you're hanging out for Twilight to be a dominant and Chrys to become sub, it's not going to happen in the story, sorry. But, will Twilight let Chryssie walk all over every time? Maybe not. Will Twilight and Chryssie clash in a battle for dominance after she gets some confidence? Maybe.
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Yep, way I see it, Twilight is an innocent little pony with an authority complex (she literally went crazy at the thought of missing one little deadline for Celestia) but if you push her too far she strike back. She's kind, but she's not defenseless.
Oh god. Now I can't wait for the next chapter.
Huh. This blends clop and story surprisingly good. I like Chrysalis portrayal here, and I think once Twilight finds what she need about her wife she'll be much harder to dominate outside of bed.
oh the queen is become nicer to twilight and well her son/little brother.... baby steps
OH Oh...oh no....well it looks like Celestia is going to have a nice time.
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HYPE!!!!
Oh this is good/so bad (in a good way).
Pfft, little does chrissy know, Twilight's been "accidentally" sending her erotic fanfiction to Celestia for years. She probably won't even notice it.
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What, no switching? If Chrysalis is so worried about her brood's numbers, then finding some way for Twilight to knock her up too would double the expediency of re-population.
Boo.
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Never said there wouldn't be switching, I just said Chrysalis wouldn't suddenly turn into a sub, not that she wouldn't be getting a good dicking. I just wanted to answer comments without straight out saying: "futatwi is going to happen". Which it will. Maybe. See? Plausible deniability!
PS: when I said "confidence" in that comment, maybe "balls" would be more appropriate.
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I am so looking forward to more. This promises to be fun.
I knew Chrysalis would do that!!!
The moment I saw twilight write and still write during their......inter course....I knew cheese legs would do that!
Oh well Celestia will have a treat during dinner!!
Man, you're really good at writing finishes.
The last few sentences have been some of my favorite parts of every chapter already.
EDIT: Ohey, comment 100.
Go me.
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Balls are always appropriate, friend.
Love the cum shower at the end there, I love it in stories as a way to mark the receivers belonging to the givers.
I cant wait to see Celestia's reaction to that perticular scroll.
It occurs to me that while Chrysalis thinks she knows what happens when a Changeling breeds with a pony I doubt it has ever happened between a queen and an alicorn before.
The only known alicorn to give birth is Cadance resulting in Flurry Heart.
What would happen to Chrysalis's plans for her hives's hierarchy if every one of her and Twilight's children is more powerful than she is?
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Every chapter's ending is like that, it's magnificent.
That was pretty wild, indeed!
So, Twi had sex for the first time and immediately got pregnant. Reminds me of a friend of mine, even if these circumstances are obviously far different
Seriously though, I can't even begin to describe how enjoyable this chapter was. There are a few things I don't usually enjoy, but the way you wrote the entire thing was great.
Also, Spike is none the wiser. Chrysalis found a practical use for the information from Twi's journal!
mhm... Changelings gotta lay eggs
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Next chapter will touch a little more the egg idea, but I'll come out and say it to avoid any disappointment: there is no oviposition in this fic.
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Publishing what is essentially a diary to the public when you have enemies out to get you ain't the smartest move, aye. And really, with a shapeshifter on the loose, that's just asking for trouble. I swear to god if Chryssie comes back in the show and uses the diary I'll just explode...
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Is that a good thing? Considering your last comment Imma go with "yes"!
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If you're curious about some of my ideas on changeling reproduction you can check my Nuptial Flight fic (it's a lot darker than this one though, even if it ends in a fluffy note, be advised). I like the xenomorph idea: offspring is still a xeno, but takes characteristics of the host. Of course, Twilight being an alicorn, that can throw a wrench in the way things work yes!
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Believe it or not but I tried to be a little more subdued about that particular kink in this story. Usually the whole "cum marking" is a lot more prevalent in my clopfics.
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Thank you! I really love writing about climaxes, both female and male. It's always fun to go completely silly with it and find all the ways imaginable to describe female orgasms and cum spurting everywhe-
Oh you meant the finish to the chapter... Well that's fun too! No but for real, doing zingers and cliffhangers is one of the best parts of writing, it's great to have fun with it.
On one hand, I really want to read this fic, but on the other, I'm not fond of Twilight being on the sub end of things. Especially not when it's as a sacrifice to a villain. Aaargh
That ending... It works because you know its going to happen from the moment she says she won't send it, but then Chrysalis did a genuinely nice thing for twilight to lower our guards. Then BOOM. Zinger.
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I'm actually half-expecting her to take advantage of that journal. Seriously, if that gets suddenly forgotten after that one episode, I'll be disappointed.
We'll see.
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Ah, well maybe this will help you out: the sacrifice thing doesn't come into play too much after the intro really. It's not "I'm married to a monster and I hate it, but I have to bear it for the sake of the land" for the whole fic or anything. I wouldn't do that to Twilight.
Let me put it this way: ever had a crazy roommate, where you have to deal with his shit, but at the end of the day you can't help but like him cause he does the dishes and gives good back massages? Kinda the same thing. Course you're not wondering if your roommates wants to backstab you or anything.
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Another difference is likely that Changelings usually don't care about the brood-mothers long term health.
While most mammals can get pregnant again within a month or two of giving birth it's discouraged by modern health standards. Pregnancy and nursing puts a lot of strain on the mothers entire body and a year or two of recovery is strongly recommended. Not just in humans but for reputable animal breeders like of dogs and horses.
Twilight might be more resistant to that stain being an unaging alicorn. But she is still a biological being who needs things like food and sleep. So being able to get endlessly pregnant without consequences is unlikely.
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It was an extremely ham-fisted double-entendre.
I'm truly impatient for the next chapter :3
I can just imagine the insanity awaiting for us next chapter XD
I fucking knew that would happen.
Well done for Twilight to have the most amazing firsts done to her by her new wife. But that there at the end was pure grade A EVIL!!!!
And was totally awesome!!! Celestia will either be completely red from reading it, or keep it private for clopping material.
Aaaah I can't wait for the next one! :)
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I think we all did dude
Kinky.
... So I'm pretty sure Chryssie could easily do a bathtub with her splooge.
Awww, she's does care.
... I hope Celestia receives that during an official meeting.
I was actually hoping that Chrysalis would live up to her threat from last chapter. Though, that was a good and really subtle way to explain why she didn't.
Plus, then we wouldn't have gotten that ending!
Lol, when Celestia reads that letter......
this never fails to make me choke
on laughter
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I kinda think that’s part of why she originally agreed to this. Twilight and hers kids would be very powerful, and I think that’s what she wants