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Break the roof with her with Twilight. You're not living up to the title yet. This is a changeling queen that needs taming, clearly.
Please for the love of anything you believe in, do not fruitloop Chrysalis at the end of this.
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its not NTR when its a friggin child with a crush.
twilight will probably do her rage evolution.
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run chysie run for your sanity
angry make up sex happens XD
Wow ths chapter was... AMAZING
I hope Twilight's punishment... But also i want to see her reaction when she learns about what Luna and Celestia tried to tell her in the castle and Salis telling them "She wrote the scroll, but she was never going to actually send it to you... Are you mad Celestia?"
Not really into that kind of thing I admit. Well , no. let's say that as far as kinky shit go , I can appreciate it somewhat on an intellectual level.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
I can understand the mechanics in such a relationship , and kind of understand the appeal of it all but...yeah , could never be in such a relationship , don't have the mindset for it. I am all for fighting for dominance; both side never submitting nor surrendering but respecting one another (which I hope is going to be the case for Chryssi and Twily relationship) but having one submissive side just suck all the fun out of it for me.
However , I am going to say that it was amazingly written and I would say arousing enough for those who enjoy that kind of thing so... Good job author I guess ?
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no just turn her into reversalise, from the mirror comic.
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And yet, no one thinks about Spike.
Looks like Twilight's going to have to break her before she's properly tamed.
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Now that's a fun idea.
That Twilight needs to use some whips on her wife for doing that!![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
Perhaps instead of background farmpony, Chrysalis decides to take Cadance (and thereby acquire Shining) instead? ;3
If only Twilight can permanently transferred a queen's cock to herself from Chrysalis will take a VIP trip to Twilight City.
Try not to destroy the Boutique, Twi...![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
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Well, Twilight is a cupcake, of course she would try the "love and peace" approach when taming Chrysalis. At first at least.
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Just FYI, when the changelings transformed in the finale I went completely nuts, flip table levels of butthurt. So if you are scared of gummy bear Chrysalis, don't be. Though... I dunno, there are some gummy bear Chrysalis pics that are really pretty...
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Hmmmm...
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Can you ever really tame wild beasts? At least, without declawing and muzzling them. Or turn them into giant pussies. *cough* Discord *cough*. Also, hard to punish Chrysalis when she gets off on pain.
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I'm sure she would love to have both Cadance and Shining as her pets, yes. They did smack her across Equestria with a pink bubble of love, that's gotta sting.
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True, but there are other kinds of pain besides physical. Breaking her spirit would be more effective than breaking her body I think.
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THE FORM OF THE DESTROYER HAS BEEN CHOSEN!
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I couldn't help it! It just...popped in there!
Now that was quite the turnaround! Rarity got so much into her fantasy that she completely forgot who she really was with... but then again, Chrysalis was able to feel what Rarity wanted all along.
That inflation though... unf.
Well, not just that. I'm not into BDSM myself so I just kinda skimmed though those parts, but everything else... unf indeed.
I'm really looking forward to Twi's reaction - it's going to be epic![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
Then again, she really should have been careful with her words to Chrysalis - now she can't even be mad at her since she explicitly told the queen that she's free to try.
Chrysalis in five minutes' time:
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This story keeps getting better and better. However, for some reason I feel that Twilight's reaction may not be what everyone is expecting. I probably will be wrong, but now I can't wait for the next chapter.
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when someone asks you, "if you are a god?" you say yes ray, yes
Very well done chapter,
I'm going to throw out a theory here, I'll spoiler tag it in case I'm right. Chrysalis will somehow get all of the mane 6 and maybe Starlight and Trixie, Twilight will allow this much. However each brood form the ponies will take after their broom mothers rather then Chrysalis, so rather then an army Chrysalis will have dozens of 'mini' Elements of Harmony. Can you imagine how annoyed she would become?
No matter what, I'm excited to see where this story goes and where it ends up!
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Assuming that Chrysalis shows up in canon again she is of course going to lose that encounter. I'm a strong believer in the rule of 3 for villain appearances. After their third loss it becomes really hard to take them seriously again.
I presume that those fans who want her redeemed would rather have her locked up in Tartarus, and those who would see her stay a villain would rather she become a rainbow changeling, than become an ineffectual joke.
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I feel like I'm in a minority for liking the new technicolor Changelings. Most of the people I see complaining for a return are either antagonist-worshipers or people who don't like the palette swap and the latter's demands seem to be more out of a case of edginess than any sort of actual aesthetic appreciation.
8489609![:twilightoops:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightoops.png)
im getting strong Too Many Pinkies episode vibes from your theory, only x100, and i don't think the world could handle that, much less chrysalis
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Hasbro con showed an animatic of the S8 opener, she's back.
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The only difference is the clones were just there, these would grow up, therefore being less...... that. but until the author writes that far its still just a theory.
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Personally there's two main reasons I really don't like the changeling transformation.
1) They looked god-awful during their reveal. Like, color palette wise, it's a mess. They actually smoothed out the jarring clashing colors in this season, so it hurts a little less to look at. I don't mind the models so much anymore, but I still like the old changeling look better. If you want an example of what I'm referring to, look at Thorax's neck: the gradient is all over the place. Otherwise the general shape of their body is head-scratchingly weird; they have wings for tails for god's sake.
2) The transformation didn't make sense. Now hear me out: Thorax transforming makes sense: he was a different kind of changeling from the start, he himself says so. From birth it seemed he was destined for something else than being a regular changeling. When he transformed I was like "Well, he looks pretty ugly, but it makes sense." It was a logical step in his arc, he was not a regular changeling. Plus, you had some foreshadowing with his sparkly wings.
But... what about all the other changelings? Why did they suddenly transform, out of the blue, just because a technicolor deer-bug-thing told them to "give love"? Are you going to tell me that none of them ever tried to "give love", when that's their main source of food? Were they good changelings all along, like Thorax? Well no, we see them being assholes just instants before. If Thorax had been the only one to change, him transforming into a "changeling king" that other drones would choose to follow over Chrysalis, I would not have minded it.
As it is, it's rushed, it's ugly (wing tails, I don't even) and it don't make sense. That's something we've seen with Starlight: redemption has to be earned. Just giving it away cheapens it. The staff did a great job retconing Starlight's instant redemption in season 6, making her earn her friendships; that was great. In the same way, Thorax earned his new colorful look. The other lings were transformed randomly.
PS: sorry for huge rant, I guess the TL;DR can be REEEEE, I don't like it!
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The transformation made sense to me under the concept (mind you this is purely headcanon based on plausibility) that this is what they were always supposed to be. Maybe what they were before, even. Given that this is Equestria, technicolor equinoid seems to be the base idea. Then Chrysalis, or whoever started it, basically fucked things up and found out they liked having essentially mindless slaves who were always hungry and would do her bidding because of it. Without producing love of their own, without having love given freely to them, without actually loving themselves or one another, they... let's call it withered. Thus the sickly appearance and holes everywhere. The very concept would thus be alien to them, especially being raised by Chrysalis - they wouldn't know anything more than they were taught, and apparently having been love-starved during, at, and after hatching (since they're born like that, seemingly) they wouldn't understand or consider the idea. Not to mention they're constantly starving, the idea of sharing what little love rations they have when they don't particularly care for each other would be absolute insanity to them. Even during the reformed hive episode we find they're still pretty selfish overall despite discovering and embracing the ability Thorax opened their eyes to, with love being part of them rather than just a coveted foodsource.
I personally think that Throax earned his... uh, antlers, for showing his species the right way. Not because of his personal accomplishments, what with the theme of the show and all.
You are literally the first person I've seen to have a valid aesthetics opinion, so certainly respect there. A lot of headcanon based on the way the world is shown to work, but if we don't fill in the holes ourselves there really isn't a cohesive story or world to the series at all. We always have to make some logic bridges using what we know for sure to anchor them. But that's the way I look at it and it feels pretty comfortable to me.
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Usually I postulate that if we need to go into headcanon to explain something that doesn't make sense, then something ain't right to begin with. I like headcanons to expand the universe, but I'll still take what the show gives me as a baseline. I'll tell you what though, the changeling transformation was frustrating for me, but seeing Chrysalis refuse the same quick easy reformation was one of the most satisfying moments in the show.
In the end I enjoyed that finale greatly, all things considered. And I'll admit I like your theory, it suits Equestria. Still, I don't like to explain away major plot holes like this so easily. Won't make me hate the show or anything though, just makes me grumpy.
The Pharynx ep is another one that really rubbed me the wrong way, but I won't get into it. That's another huge rant right there. As for Thorax, yeah, as I said I totally agree that he deserves to be rewarded. If he had led the changelings into a new path, and they had gradually changed instead of instantly transforming (as you said, they are still kinda assholes in that last ling episode... so what was the point of becoming gummy bears? Heck Pharynx didn't even change his attitude, his hive stills hates him and he still transformed! It would have been a great message about accepting difference but nooo, everybody has to be a goddamn gummy bear... erf nope, not getting into it. Oh god this parenthesis is going on for too long!) then I would have probably loved it.
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I'm fine with headcanon so long as it's based on what we DO know, and is more plausible than 'this is what I want to happen/this supports my bias'. ... And as long as it's somewhat interesting. As I said, if we took everything at face value we honestly wouldn't have much of a story or world at all, and that'd just suck. So we make assumptions (we have to, otherwise things that are merely silly become mind-blowingly stupid if taken at face value without some form of headcanon to try and make sense of things, such as Starlight's reason for wanting to go tyrannical evil dictator because her childhood friend got praised for getting his cutie mark in saving her ... what?).
That all aside, I completely respect your own views on the subject, and I can see where you're coming from.
While rereading this chapter this bit of dialogue really grabbed my attention.
Hot. I'm pretty sure Chrysalis has said something similar to this in another story you wrote. I certainly wouldn't mind seeing her actually following through this time. Just throwing that out there.
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I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks this.
I loved everything about the first five chapters of this story. It was setting up an amazing plot.
But Cheating/Infidelity, even though I know it doesn't quite qualify and I know what her reasons are, makes me super uncomfortable, which is sad because this story has so much merit as it is.
I have mixed feelings, but I'll keep reading because of the amazing quality and plot. Maybe I'll end up liking the direction it's going in
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If you take their comics origin--that the original changelings, including Chrysalis, were spawned from within an undead tree in the midst of a pit of death and corruption--into consideration, then perhaps over who knows how many generations they gradually began to purify, until one drone (Thorax) un-corrupted enough to go against his base nature and return to a more natural state of life was born. That purity, and the insight that triggered it, was then passed on to the rest. Perhaps, with enough time, even Chrysalis would have achieved that same insight.
Just an aside: Thorax (and by extension the rest of the good changelings) looks the way he does because of the iridescence of stag beetles. Thorax's new form is based almost entirely on a stag beetle. Changelings in general are based on beetles.
Also, Armadillo, this story is great. Your Chrysalis is terrifying... ><
8489609![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
That is kind of a huge flaw in Chrysalis' overall plan. I mean, sure, she rebuilds her hive, but considering who the other parent(s) of her changelings are going to be, they're not going to turn out like she expects at all...
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im in the same boat. I despise infidelity with my entire being, but im gonna avoid outright dropping this for now, in hopes of twilight beating some monogamy into that bug.
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Aye, the concept is so depraved and seems to fit with the hive-oriented Chrysalis, I used that idea in the first chapter of Nuptial Flight. We'll see if it really happens, we'll see...
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Can't tell you what happens, but I will direct you to chapter 5, and Twilight's response when Thorax asks her if she really is into polygamy. Problem is, Chrysalis is by nature a creature that will seek out multiple mates, particularly when it comes to needing a stallion. How Twilight deals with that is the big question.
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If you look at the coloration of a stag beetle, they have corresponding colors, they are bright and glossy. Problem with the changed lings, is that they are pastel toned, and they have non-corresponding colors. In pastel, the colors clash together, they don't work together palette wise.
Could have done without the Shining scenes, but they were easily skipped. Eager to see Twilight's reaction. I hope she doesn't rage, but instead hits Chrysalis where it really hurts:
Showing her how betrayed she feels and showing her how hurt she'll be.
OoOoh. The fun continues
Hawt. All of the kinks!
Whew, glad that you dislike the gummiebugs and skittle moose too, the entire thing makes no sense and they look horrible, not to mention they are infinitely less interesting now.
Well, Twilight did permit her to do just that. >.>
Godspeed, you crazy best bughorse.
why do I have feeling in the end, it going to be twilight hold the whip and leash
Main question is, what shocked Twilight more: session, or who been participant.
Twilight is now debating whether to take Rarity to an abortion clinic or Chrysalis to a divorce lawyer.
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You can still be cheated on when you are into polygamy. I personally do not like, condone or support polygamy/polyamory, but since actual equines do it, i can believe MLP ponies would probably do it.
Very Hawt
Unicorn.
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Fixed, danke!
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I'm kind of the opposite. While BDSM isn't really my thing I understand that its more theatre than anything else and that responsible practitioners have developed all kinds of safeguards to prevent real long term harm. So I don't find it creepy at all. With Cum Inflation on the other hand all I can think of is how that such a sudden and violent stressing of the uterus must cause all kinds of damage and horrible internal bleeding and can't suspend disbelief for it.
Fuckity fuck, this was hot. Need more, soon!![:flutterrage:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/flutterrage.png)
But only after we see Twilight rip Chrissy a new one for not understanding her sarcasm/irony before. Or worse, ignoring it![:twilightoops:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightoops.png)