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8656882
I have a soft spot for the little guy, and in a story about love and family around Twilight, it's impossible for him not to have a big role. That zeppelin episode, where Twi straight out says he's family to her... fucking perfect.
8659017
Feel free!
Chrysalis just knows how to push an Alicorns buttons, doesn't she?
And Twilight still don't know about her scroll being send to Celestia... Daaaamn x'D
here's guessing that through some crazy currcumstances, applejack joins them but here own choice . not by seduction.
Big Mac: *sees Chryssi coming* Eenope! *turns and bucks Chryssi clear back to Friendship Castle*
Snrk, "Gah, friendship, how do I cure it?!"
Mmmm, bacon.
... *rolls Thorax off a cliff* :D
Damn, she draws fast.
8659049
In the show she has managed to beat the alicorn princesses with sneakiness two times, once at the wedding, and once when Starlight and Co had to rescue everybody. Three times if you count the alternate timeline. I think it's safe to say she knows her enemy by now.
8659084
Better to keep that surprise for another time Chryssie needs to send Twilight into a neurotic fit. Also she might legit explode in embarrassent.
8659085
N-noooo... Tots not gonna happen, that's silly.
...
8659277
You're saying that as if Chrysalis wouldn't enjoy it, and come for seconds.
I see Applejack intercepting her, joining the herd if she leaves Big Mac alone
8659350
No, for if she can't open her wings fast enough, Chryssi go SPLAT. Then spends long time in bed recuperating and trying new plan: Sympathy.
Ugh, please don't actually include big Mac
I'm going to be honest here: this story legit disgusts me from time to time, but at the same time, this feeling of morbid curiosity keeps me reading it. Don't get me wrong, there are some parts that I like too (no, I'm not talking about the clop
okay maybe a little), but still, I can't get over the fact that they take pregnancy so lightly. I mean heck, Thorax already told Twlight how powerful Changeling spem is!I just hope nothing will happen to Spike, he is too precious for this world.
perfect opener to the chapter
8660053
Despite this fic's serious tone and attempts at character drama, you really have to just disconnect some parts of your brain, enjoy the outstanding clop sections and accept it for the harem fic that it is. It's as ridiculous as A Zepplin Named Desire, just not as over-the-top.
Everything in this fic, from the absurd premise onward, serves the end goal of a harem story.
Twilight and Rarity give near-zero thought to the reality (the reality, not "omg I'm a mommy that's awesome") of being impregnated (and implicitly transformed in Twi's case) without their consent (via cum that is outright described as impossible to counter and you haven't turned off your brain yet?) by an evil shapeshifting hive queen aberration who was born from a rotting tree, because that's likely never going to be relevant to this story.
Chrysalis isn't a powerful master manipulator (and never has been. She lost the wedding ep by doing the last thing a species of shapeshifting infiltrators should ever do: announce her presence. Then she magically grabbed all the main characters in S7 off-screen because the plot needed her to). She only appears to be because she has a biological or magical answer to every non-conversation situation (including mind control poison, so there's no point to this entire story except the clop anyway) and the rest of the cast lets her walk all over them, especially the blatantly out-of-character and borderline-Fluttershyesque Twilight.
Celestia, who we all know would normally be watching all of this like a hawk (as would the rest of the mane six and Luna, except here they just don't), loses her mind over nothing so that she won't be a hindrance to the plot. Meanwhile Luna rams right into the same character chopping block Twi did and just goes along with everything.
Spike exhibits no ill effects from suddenly eating meat when he's lived on gems all his life.
And so on. Whatever the plot needs to happen so it can reach its end goal, that's gonna happen.
8660147
Yeah, I guess you're right.
Well, like you said, this is a harem fic, so let me just flick the good old brain switch and— voilá! Now I am as braindead as the anime watching; 13 years old version of myself!
Alternate title: How Twilight tries emotional manipulation and fails because she can't disassociate herself from her own emotions.
But hey, Chrysalis is slowly, very slowly coming around!
I love the dynamic she has with Rarity, though! Two dominant personalities, but somehow it still works.
... that 'marking' of Luna though...
8659045
Yay!!!
Thank you!!! I have grown attached to Spike. The Zeppelin story was a great bit sad didn't hear about Spike, but when Velvet mentions him and she wanted him to join in, I was "That right Velvet you tell her!!(Come Twilight you know you want to! For Science!)"
I really like the way you are developing Chryssi's character! She is so much fun read! You have her in a good balance of nice and mischief! That argument you had her with Twilight was so funny. Also, the way she starting to slowly care for the characters (especially Spike) is a great development for Chryssi.
Going after the Apple family would be a bit a challange and would also be the same for Rainbow since both are "Honesty and Loyalty", the easier targets would have been Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie. But Chryssi likes challenges!! I cannot wait for next chapter!
I find Chrissy's soft moments to be extremely cute. Kudos for them!
I so want to see how much teasing will Rainbow be able to take. Certainly not much... But what about her fetishes?
Oh, and I can imagine Thorax discovering that kings go through certain changes when exposed to do much love... And he cursing his mother for never telling him he could give her grandchildren that way
Ah good, I'm eager to see what's become of Applejack after Chrysalis did...whatever she did to her.
And am I hoping too much when I hope we'll see all the Mane Six turned into broodmares?
Excellent story so far. Here's to hoping for more.
That said, I hope this doesn't end up having a hentai-style ending. That'd be really disgusting after everything that's happened up to this point.
I really like this, this is slow, this is meaningful, this will work....hopefully.
I hope Twilight remembers she can teleport and gets there before Chrysalis.
8659045
It's so nice to see Spike getting some love. Sometimes it feels like authors just forget he exists.
two words i love it. ok that was three.
this story is just so good super fun to read and the snark is perfect.
Big Mac? isn't he with Sugar Bell?
So far so good, waiting for next chapter!
8670535
If your going off the show... don't. Personally I don't think the show will really "ship" anypony with anyone. And it's not like the show does a great job anyway.