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Oh, Twilight. You're well on your way to just accepting your new life of non-stop kinky sex. Good for you.
Aww crap, Apple jack left herself wide open with that last bit... now another of tartarus has been opened up to them. I figured Rainbow Dash would have been next.
This is bad.
Someone get a squirt bottle and a rolled up newspaper, we need to teach Chrysalis some manners. And house training.
I am really liking Chrissy, she is so much fun to read! and right at the end, all I can think of is "Excellent, all is going according to plan!"
For which is making me wish for more!!!
Pretty sure Equestria would have free healthcare.
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She gets off on being whipped until the whip breaks, I don't think your newspaper is gonna do much.
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I'm back in the groove as it were, so expect chapters to come regularly from now on. Glad you're having fun!
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Well AJ is always talking about how she needs bits for Granny's new hip, it must be pretty costly. Let's not bring IRL politics into this though, pretty please.
This is funny, and really good. Watching Chrysalis turn situations to her benefit is hilarious.
I love this story. Even though Chrysalis doesn't always 'win' per-say, she rarely loses, and she always seems to have something else tucked up her invisible sleeves(such as pink aphrodisiac venom lol).
If you haven't gotten a chance to read the story "Why are You Here Your Majesty," you should really give it a read. Several of the ideas in that fic could likely be brought over to this fic, especially the ones in regard to what changelings sharing love does and why Chrysalis is the way she is.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/361736/why-are-you-here-your-majesty
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It's not for pain, it's for humiliation.
Excellent chapter!
Oh boy, heaven help Big Mac if he ever learns about this little incident.
And now we get to see what AJ's like with lowered inhibitions.
I love Chryssie, she has plans nested in plans nested in plans nested in plans nested in tricks, etc.
I imagine Luna is going through her 20th rigorous bath and scrubbing by now.
Snrk, dis gun b gud.
Looks like this little attempt of Twilight's to be more asserting with her wife *shades* bit her in the ass.
Aww, i was hoping for some chryssy on big mac action this chapter . Regardless, great chapter.
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I've no doubt she wants to add Mac's studliness to their hive/herd eventually, but I'm pretty sure all of Chrysalis' intense focus is on rounding up all of Twilight's friends at the moment.
Chrysse has a point. I honestly order a discord style reform. Not thorax.
I so enjoy Chryssy in this fic.
Good grief, I keep expecting Chrisalis to actually make good on her repeated threats of swallowing Twilight whole like some bad reenactment of Nightmare Moon gobbling up foals who didn't give her candy. At least Twilight's learning how to deal with her as the two of them rub off on each other. Huh, that came out all wrong, didn't it.
I love reading a story that really lets the reader in on the twist feeling of surprise that having with a duplicitous shapeshifter character brings.
Chrysalis's first disguise and "non-venomous" bite both fooled me. Very nice.
If Twilight doesn't mare up and completely tame her then Equestria is screwed!!!
Ah, the eternal dichotomy between a changeling queen and the princess of friendship. It always makes for a fun dynamic.
AJ's reactions though, priceless! Especially with how Chryssie played along.
But it was nice to see that Twi actually learned her lesson indeed and didn't do a panic teleport.
Heh, so a "no venom" bite, huh?
Yea, right
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Is that really a bad thing?
I'm glad that SalÃs was not involved with the real Big mac, and that roleplay.... Daaaaaaamn
Your story keeps me hyped x3
ok this is a vary fun chapter.
I am pretty sure AJ got a good dose of something injected from that little love bite.
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Problem with that though is that as long as she stays in that form, she will constantly have to feed, and her instincts will still want to mate with more mares to make more mothers for her hive. Discord, is a troll and nothing more, as long as his reality bending is self contained, he ain't hurting anyone, but Chrysalis is literally forcing Twilight's friends to fall for her so she can mate with them.
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Is it? They all have a choice.
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Well considering the last sentence of this chapter implies she injected venom into Apple Jack, I believe it is safe to assume that she is using something whether it is venom or some power pheromones to make Twilight's friends lust for her. I mean look how many of them acted toward Chrysalis at the start of the story and heck look at how Rarity acted towards Chrysalis before she mated with Rarity, she was practically berating the Changeling Queen while fighting away lustful urges. That is telling me Chrysalis is doing something to her to make he lust for her, I mean heck, back during the wedding, Twilight was terrified and even acted like her heart was broken at the prospect of her doing this but she was hiding it for the sake of Equestria only to start to lust and even start to warm up to the idea better once she was close to Chrysalis.
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But she can't keep injecting them so they decide to stay.
So Chrysalis is about to have a threesome with Applejack and Twilight from what I am reading so far. The question is who will break first? Will the queen make her move? Will Applejack break character? Placing all bets, people! Placing all bets!
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She literally just lied and disobeyed Twilight with Apple Jack, what is stopping her from doing it again? She only has to get 3 more members and she has all of the Mane 6, and then if she hasn't changed, or hasn't atleast changed her ways, whats stopping her from doing to even more ponies outside of the Mane 6 once she has them all under her influence? I mean, she may stick to the agreement and not harm the ponies, but if she impregnates every mare, then she might as well have taken over, because then there would be to many Changelings spread out to far through Equestria to ever get rid of.
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reformation takes time. and she has shown she does care about Twilight beyond her carrying Chryssys kids. She even cares for Spike.
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True, but I am talking about after reformation, your argument was that she should have a "Discord" style reformation, meaning she still acts like her normal deceiving self, she just now means no harm to anypony. But the issue with this is, she will still be hungry and she will still want to mate with every mare she sees, if she does not change the way the other changelings did, then this aspect won't change regardless of how "reformed" she is. Even now Discord has slip ups from time to time, looking for any excuse to unleash his chaos without loosing Fluttershy and I still believe if given the opportunity he would unleash it, in a heartbeat if their was no risk of him loosing Fluttershy's friendship. So if Chrysalis does not undergo a drastic change then she could also suffer these "slip ups" but unlike Discord, someponies going to be getting pregnant in the process.
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which is why the girls can be that buffer. she is jsut in a nesting phase for now.
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But once she gets them, whats stopping her from just screwing the contract. I mean, if she really does care about Twilight, she can just force Twilight to continue loving her so once the remaining Mane 6 is in her nesting circle what then stops her from going further, she won't have to worry about loosing Twilight, and without Equestrias "heroes" to stop her, she would be free to do whatever she pleases. It would essentially be like how Discord betrayed Twilight and her friends and even Fluttershy, once Tirek offered him a friendship and the ability to spread Chaos and that was enough for him, only this time their is no other bad guy that can betray Chrysalis and show her what she did was wrong.
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Also, we still don't know if this nesting phase is just for the form she currently is in or if its just a part of their nature, Seeing how so far Thorax has yet to need to go through such a cycle and if they do find a new Queen, it is not 100 percent set in stone if she will act like Chrysalis, atleast not in the same way she is acting. So if this is just how the act regardless then fine, but if Chrysalis can over come it by changing then if the truly cared for Twilight she would change so she would stop hurting her by going off and sleeping and impregnating her friends.
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Discord's issue was he was really leashed Chrssy not as much and again Twilight is already affecting her.
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What leash did he have? When the Elements were gone, what stopped him taking over Equestria then, he basically acted like the tea parties with Fluttershy was boring him, so... Yes he did not want to loose his friend, but unlike Chrysalis who can be defeated with a strong amount of love, nothing that we currently know about can stop him. He made a mistake and since then he has not done anything since, but Chrysalis has already betrayed Twilight and is in the process of doing it again.
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before Tirek it seemed he was rather limited in what chaos he can do. afterwards he seems to have more freedom.
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Before Tirek, most ponies still did not trust him, but Twilight did not revert him to stone when he messed up her house with his chaos and even went to the literal ends of Equestria to find a flower to cure a flue he did not really have. And then when he really did get sick, she still helped nurse him back to health. She also did nothing to Discord as he sat around and did nothing while Everfree vines were taking over Ponyville. Yes, he can't forcibly take the sun and moon and change their colors or make them raise and lower at random times, but he is still free to entertain himself, and as long as it does not spread throughout the town, he has always been able to use his magic while in the presence of the others and Fluttershy actually likes Discords magic. Point is though, even when Discord was evil, he still did not really intend to hurt the ponies, heck the only reason he wanted to take over Equestria was so he could force the ponies to appreciate his chaos, he did not really care for power like the other villains because he is already extremely powerful. However, leaving Chrysalis to her vices means that either Twilight has to cave in, and have no say in this marriage, and watch, painfully as her wife keeps bringing home ponies she intends to breed with or Twilight has to call the marriage off, and just let Chrysalis be free to mate with whoever and however many ponies she wants and Twilight goes and finds a mate that will solely love her. Chrysalis has continuously brought up to Twilight that Twilight is refusing to compromise and let her go by her nature, yet Chrysalis has basically had all the say, She is turning Twilights castle into a hive, impregnated her and Rarity with the first batch of changeling offspring, with likely more mothers coming, if she succeeds with Twilight's remaining friends, basically can whore herself out to whoever but would basically kill whatever pony Twilight decided to sleep with if she decides to play Chrysalis's game. So this marriage already seems one sided, so I feel that Chrysalis needs to drastically change for Twilight's sake.
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Or assert herself herself. Show herself a strong mate. There is a way to reform Chryssy but not fully change who she is.
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But it is who she is that is the problem. She is a lying, deceptive, manipulative creature that uses peoples on love against them as well as steals it to not only feed herself but make her stronger. You can't keep those qualities and have her be reformed and good, Discord can be a troll because that what he has always been, and while he is annoying, he does not try to hurt anyone. And even if Chrysalis is no longer trying to hurt ponies, she is still hurting Twilight. Also Twilight has been trying to be assertive, but Chrysalis has thousands of years worth of practice and experience where as Chrysalis was literally Twilight's first.
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I disagree
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Might I ask why? Chrysalis is manipulative, that is a part of her character, but that is also something that does not help build trust, do you really think that if she keeps acting like she does even after reformation, that that is going to cause Twilight's parents and brother to feel safer having Twilight around Chrysalis? Also what of her family, I am curtain despite whatever plans Chrysalis has for her drones that Twilight is going to treat them like they were normal foals, and give them names and raise them a by way of pony and I am positive she would want her family their on her big day when she gives birth, but that would be hard if their relationship is strained because of Chrysalis's behavior. Also do you think Shining Armor or Twilight's parents would approve of Twilight building some harem with her friends?
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because she can still be reformed enough. right now she is showing signs she does care about Twilight. Hell Twilight hot tiing her turned her on. I ay Chryssy would end up similar to Garrack for Deep Space Nine
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Can't really say anything about Deep Space Nine as I have never seen it, nor do I really get the reference, but Chrysalis actions and behaviors are hurtful, and honestly I am hoping this story does not go down the path of becoming a Harem, which is my may fear with Chrysalis remaining how she is, harem stories are fine for clop and one off stories where their is no relationship involved, but Twilight and Chrysalis is married, and I feel it becoming a harem, would make the whole relationship seem pointless, like if this is the path your going, then why not have Chrysalis reformed through friendship instead of love, then both Twilight and Chrysalis is free to mate with who the please, as their are no obligations, but if Chrysalis will just keep doing this until Twilight has no choice but to except it then it ruins the relationship part of the marriage as you can no longer imagine a happy ending where Chrysalis is good, and her and Twilight together raise their offspring and instead is replaced with some ending with a sex circle of the Mane 6, all impregnated, and all either being mothers for Chrysalis's drones or having to raise them alone, but still get the benefits of the sex.
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Both Twilight and Chryssy will likely be changed by this. And Twi may end up liking a harem of her friends. Chryssy is already changing a small extent. She cares for Twilight and Spike she doesn't fully understand why but she is and maybe that is making her more how she is.
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So you are ok with Twilight changing but not Chrysalis? As I said, I am hoping this does not become a harem, it under minds any sense of relationship development between Chrysalis and Twilight. What is the point of them being married, if Chrysalis is just going to mate with all her friends, it may as well been a friends with benefits sort of story rather than a love story between Twilight and Chrysalis.
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I figure both are going to change. The degree depends on story. The fact Twilight asserted herself in this last chapter will uave an affect. And again, befote the marriage would Chryssys care about Spike?
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I am certain that Twilight will change some, sure but I can't see her changing enough to allow all of her friends and possibly other ponies to become brood mothers for Chrysalis, regardless of Chrysalis's nature. Also we don't know, I believe had Twilight been able to sign an agreement with Chrysalis to where they could be friends and Chrysalis stayed with Twilight long enough that Chrysalis may start to take on a mother role for Spike given her knowledge of the species.
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But Twilight won't push them away if they want it.