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This story is a sequel to A Tale of the Sun, Moon, and Stars
The Moon has fallen, reduced to mere shadow of herself after the Nightmare claimed her. With only fragments of herself left, the Moon must find a way to stop the Nightmare, and escape from her lunar prison. Thankfully she won't have to do it alone.
Luna's story, and the final sequel to A Tale of the Sun, Moon, and Stars.
Pre-Readers: Bok, xXWeed_Princess420Xx, Void Chicken
Cover art "Luna Descends" by LeLittleLuna.
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Oopsie.
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Thank you!
Will the elements regain their memories once they accend back to allicorns? Bucuse Luna and celestia knew rather stars were their sister.
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I left that up to the reader. I also made their status in Her Happily Ever After ambiguous for the same reason.
What I wanted to show here is that in every one of the Mane Six beats the heart of Princess/Alicorn.
I'm honestly curious about the odd-alicorn-out in this AU: Cadance. I suspect that it must've been a real WTF moment for Celestia to have a previously-unknown immortal embodiment suddenly crop up.
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I actually wrote a story about it. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/88484/through-ice-and-shadow
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Thanks!
How did I miss this?
Why is this so funny to me?
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sleep’s
Either ‘the pony’ or ‘everypony’, not ‘the everypony’, unless they want to share how much joy exists with a strange entity which combines aspects of all the individual ponies.
‘one shard to the next’, perhaps? Or ‘shard to shard’?
You aren’t supposed to close the quotation unless they are done speaking. Unless it’s Moon who says perfect?
they were full
moon shone through
Another extra closing quotation.
for a long
begin to tell
To get under your hide? And? I like ‘to’ best, but ‘and’ might work. Or is this a purposeful oddity due to the speaker?
horn
Honesty
‘a reflection’ or ‘reflections’.
were
‘of ponies’ or ‘pony’, not ‘of pony’.