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good story so far
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Much appreciated.
Woo, looking forward to this.
I don't think coloured text will feel right in a fic like this.
Good start fanfiction what next .🖖
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Good to hear. Glad ya like it.
Im so following this and like it.
It's very nice, and interesting indeed. For now I give it a follow and Thumb up! If the story continues nicely I will give it a Fav and also follow you (:
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This isn't really about the story, but who is the guy in that meme?
There's a bit of grammar errors Thru out the chapter, but other then that this sounds very exciting!
Might wanna watch the quality writing thou, some places almost seemed rushed, rushed stories don't go well togeather, so take more time to add detail and more...more to the chapter.
8426379 Yeah, I think I know what happened. I may have gotten a bit too eager to get this published, trying to get to the good part. It'll be better. May revise it again after the next chapter is posted. There will be a lot more details in the future, especially in battles. There'll have to be. 😉
Thanks for the constructive criticism
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No problem man.
I look forward to reading more!
dont fell sorry here have a sweetroll.
What i dont know is why did you make the story anthro and not a pony one if there wont be any clop? Usually anthro fics are for clop, for obvious reasons, or are you planning a relationship with one of the natives in the story? That wont neccesary require clop, i personally rather a pony fic, and anthros for clop, so i was surprised when this fic was anthro when you said it wont have any clop in it, I though it was a pony one XD.
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Anthro doesn't always equal clop. The reason I probably won't have any clop scenes is because:
1. I suck at writing it.
2. I prefer my fictions being story-based more than just sex. It may be implied, but I'd rather not deviate from the plot with pony plot that much.
As for why I made them anthos instead of normal ponies if I'm not gonna make any sex scenes? Because I want to. If you want a normal pony fic, (which also has a bit of anthro in it) try my other fic.
As for the relationship planning? I'm not gonna answer that for spoiler reasons.
Anyway, sorry if I disappoint you.
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I know, but it's such an old, overused and annoying meme that's dead! XD
The quality is much better then before, now I'm hooked to this AWESOME story!
An arrow to the knee.......really?
Lol haven't heard that joke in years. Xp
Bring on the next chapters!!!
Nice, i"m looking forward into this
I like it, please, please, do not go to hiatus to soon...
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Good news! I don't plan on it.
Great chapter.
Best chapter yet!
And the writing quality was near top notch! Xd
Good chapter, I don't usually read anthro fics unless they are really good, this appears to be in that category.
GOD-FUCKING-DAMMIT, I NEED MOAR!!!! FUCK!!!!!!!
I'll admit i wasn't sold on the first two chapter, but i think i have warmed up to this story after this one.
Here's waiting for the next update
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Well, you may not have to wait much more. I'm finishing up the next chapter as we speak while starting on the one after that.
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Thanks, better late than never
Kill all the ponies!!!
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"I'm very tempted to turn this castle into a glue factory, but I'm gonna hear 'em out first. Maybe teach 'em a lesson."
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Ooohhh~~ i like~
Interesting chapter. Heads are gonna roll, probably latterly, for taking his weapons. Lol
Look forward to the next chapter!
It’s alive
Okay for one he has to stop punching all the females he only knocks out the the stallions but not the females and can you make his armor it's like some kind of super armor like he's super strong and super fast and all the other stuff it just makes more sense really.
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1. Would ya rather him riddle her with lead? He has a reason to. Its not like she was unarmed, and they did attack first. Would ya like that? Or would ya rather him go easy on her and pop her right in the sniffer?
2. It's just one chick whose nose he keeps breaking. It's the same mare that just has a durable face.
3. Also, keep in mind how he knocks out the stallions. Would ya like for him to knock 'er out the same brutal way he did them?
If ya have a problem with females getting injured, ya might like 7HiP better. ...after the first few chapters.
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It never died. Just was coming along very very slowly
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I'm practically done writing it. Just checking on things and re-reading it.
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I know, I was being sarcastic
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SWEET!!!
I kinda hoping he finally hits how just how small and inconsequential they are, I could see the planet being of strategic importance. With the subjects being of...... minor importance. It would be funny for him to point out.
“This is not War this is Pest control!”
Also I would like Luna’s impulsive behavior to bite her on the flank at some point.
Also please don’t have them suddenly understand his advanced technology I’m tired of that plot hole in stories. Ponies haven’t really shown that much impressive intellectual capacity, Twilight Sparkle is at best above average and she’s supposed to be the cream of the crop! Besides largely ponies seem to have a medieval mindset and society, with only a few oddity’s that are out of place.
9058594 Oh you worry too much. I wouldn't make such a novice mistake. This is precisely one of the reasons why I'm writing this fic. I've read too many ones where they have this exact plothole you speak of. Ponies knowing how to drive vehicles, or how to reload a gun (do I need to mention that the ponies aren't even anthro in these fics?) You won't find that here.
Also, you'll find in the next chapter about what happened to Luna, and how Sunbutt feels about it.
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It would be funny to have then manage to take apart some of the technology, and realize they are in waaaaaay over their heads. You could make it comical and reference the idea of “cargo cults” with them assuming it’s all magical or something.
Also while some people might not like this depiction of Luna in stories I find it rather fitting. After being the ponies Boogiemare for so long, it’s not a stretch she would be impulsive in trying to protect them. She’s kinda the more edgy princess because of this, and it could easily cloud her judgement and make her make poor decisions trying to right her past. Tantabus anyone?
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That basically sums up this version of Luna. Quick to take matters into her own hands without thinking things through.
As for the tech, that's explained in the chapter I had just published.
oh god....don't bring molestia into this
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Nah. Just a bigger fan of humans than Lyra due to similar appearance with the primeapes she oh so adores.
Well a little comedy is always nice even in these most dire of times. I’m wondering how the elements will handle him though. As for the Royal Gaurd I’m wondering if they will try and push his buttons. He likely has hurt their pride more then once.
Lol celestia. What's the height of the ponies compared to the humans?
What's the thing about bananas and the princesses? I've seen this meme in many stories but I never found out what it all was about.
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TO THE MOOOOOOOON!!!
Also, let's just say an average adult mare's boobs are at Rex's eye level. Celestia and Luna are taller of course. I got the idea from how tall a normal pony would be if they stood on their hind legs.
9137800 Well, seeing how Sunbutt favors him a lot, I doubt not many guards would give him any shit not wanting to get on her bad side, neither would they want to get on his bad side either. Maybe some of the hard core stubborn ones, but as someone with superior tech and firepower, he wouldn't have to worry. As for the mane 6, one would believe he'd be on RD's good side seeing as how he saved Scootaloo, which also may put him in a brighter light with the other CMC and their sisters, Twilight we already kinda know. Only mystery being Fluttershy.
Is this a "The last of us" reference?
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Never played it. ...Or watched anyone play it.