[Canceled. Chapters unhidden.]
Rainbow Dash has been practicing a set of stunts that she's sure will impress the Wonderbolts, but one in particular has been giving her difficulty and she attempts to enlist the aid of a friend.
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A lot happened in a very short amount of time.
This looks promising though, and you seem to write with a high level of competence.
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Thanks! But as quickly as it seems to progress now, it went even faster in the original draft. Way, way too fast.
This is done very well so far, and looks quite promising!
Well, nothing in this story particularly grabs me, but there seems to be some sort of appeal to this. I can't put my finger on it, but I'll be keeping an eye on this story.
Let me guess a apple dash??
Mmm, tastes like Appledash incoming.
Tasty. I'll keep an eye on this. It progressed a little fast for my tastes. Pacing is important, and it's good you noticed. Maybe a bit more attention to detail and description? I dunno. Spike would also probably know that Twilight wouldn't mind seeing Rainbow, but I'm guessing it's set up for something else in chapter two, so I'll reserve my opinions for then. 
55189 I always took him to be the literal interpretation kind of guy. Dragon. Guydragon... you know what I mean. I could see Twilight with a stern expression on her face telling Spike not to disturb her for anything.
first came here two days ago and noticed you didn't have a comment for this chapter yet so i registered.
I'm really liking this story though seems to be coming along at a good pace, tricking AJ into the sky and getting her to enjoy it, good way to bond with each other, can't help but imagine Dash taking AJ for a flight now and Aladdin's song 'A Whole New World' being song. that would be great lol
The ending of chapter two has been revised to create a lead-in to chapter three, which I'm starting as I post this.
Sorry for the wait, guys. I've only recently gotten back my motivation to work on the story, but here's the third chapter. I hope it's good enough!
The plot thickens
I finaly got the time to reread this.
I dont really remember the older version (since i read too many fics^^) but this one is very good (too)
Hope you get around too upload the next chapter soon. cant wait to read more ^^
Please upload another chapter soon!
Tracking.
DON'T YOU DARE KILL APPLEJACK D:
606741 Funny you should say that. Maybe you've seen what inspired this story?
608837 Poor AJ! Well i am done with tragedy for now, so i think i'll pass ._.
I have to confess... I just haven't been feeling this story lately. It's my first fanfic since returning to writing after so long, and the idea behind it seemed great at the time. This story is based on a short little thing I found a long time ago about Rainbow Dash flying with Applejack. If you've seen it, just know that Apples & Rainbows isn't going to end the same way.
But now? Now I look at it and think to myself, "why did you even want to do this in the first place?" I've heaped promise after promise on this story to see it through, but there are just so many others I want to focus on now instead. Consequently, the quality of chapters has been declining, even in the face of a rewrite.
I guess what I'm trying to say is if you guys really want it, I'll forge ahead. But if you're fine with it, I'd really rather work on the other stories I have planned.
692311 While I'd like to see where this is going, I don't want to force you to write something you don't want to write. Especially when that way it won't turn out as good as if your heart was in it.
692352 same here , if you decide to move on to other things then good luck with those
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So was this rewrite planned before or after the cancellation? Either way, it seems like it was turning into a completely different story than the original.
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The rewrite was in the works far before being canceled. I hope the rewrite seemed like a different story, to be honest. I felt that the original draft progressed far too quickly with far too little description and was not breaking into the romantic aspect very well. If it had kept going, the romance would have dropped into the story like a ton of bricks.