The sequel to Following a Rainbow has finally arrived! Read along as Rainbow's life is thrown into chaos, fighting off the magical forces that created her. Can Applejack save her filly friend from... herself? Caught between two rivaling loyalties, Rainbow finds herself split... literally. Two separate Rainbows seeking two separate dreams, ad one very confused, hurt Applejack.
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Super awsome storie
Really love it :)
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Glad to hear it :D I hope you love the rest just as much :)
Somehow I like the idea of Rainbow Dash having magic powers,let´s see were this is going.
I am just wondering why RD have to think,I mean:
The love of her life ,the orchard and her new family vs The wonderbolts which rejected her.
Also I dont understand why Applejack don´t support RD in her old/new lifetime dream.
Anyway good chapter. ; )
Awww I wanted rainbow to beat the crap out of that idiotic stallion
Me no gusta.
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What don't you like about it?
532677 I love the rest of it.. but i hate the idea about rainbow acctually finding it difficult to choose over her girlfriend or the wonderbolt, which she was already rejected from.
534587 or was she... (new chapter is up btw)
Something here is nagging at me. I don't know what it is... but there is something.. DAMNIT
568746 nagging how?
Read the first one. Really awesome and touching , tho i have criticism ready! Not much , don't worry.
It's just that at some chapters, the story seems to 'drag' for a little too long, like, the search for RD could have been shortened a little while other moments featuring AJ and RD cuddling back together could have been featured... Just something on my mind! @.@
I don't like starting incomplete stories, so i'm on the wait of you finishing this one so i can read it. I have the feel it's going to be lovely too :D
Wait, how did Spitfire know AJ calls her Dashie?
CAN'T TAKE THE D'AAAAAAW I...I.. HNNNNNNNNNNNNNG
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Thank you for the criticism! I really, really appreciate it! And this story is sorta on hold for another week or so, until I graduate high school. Then it will update and complete in no time!
ALL MY FEELS
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<3 I'm glad you are enjoying the story!
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Aaand a new one is coming up in just a few mins here too :)
Nice, this is getting good!
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haha. well I'd hope so!
Knew from the beginning that had to be a surprise visit from Rainbolt.
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Aww to obvious huh?
996338 Well I just assumed Dashie would never fly that fast out of nowhere, as Rainbolt seems to have all that part of Rainbow Dash's personality.
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Hey, as it seems you are online now, could you go check out the new story I am just about to upload (it's short) and tell me what you think?
996390 Well, I was going to go to bed soon since it's 3:30 in the morning, but if it's going up here withing the next couple minutes then yeah I can give it a go.
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I can't upload it on here right now, but it's up on DevART. If you wanna check tomorrow it should be on here.
*grabs popcorn* It starts.
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Thanks so much for the input! Yeah, I was actually quite troubled writing that last part with Dashie, but I'm glad it turned out so well! It's kinda funny, actually, going back and reading the first few chapters of Following a Rainbow, because it is interesting to see how much I've improved :D
Of course, my improvement is softly in part to constructive criticism, and readers like you, so thank you!
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Can't remember, we're you the one who wanted a fight scene between Dashie and Rainbolt?
Uh... Not to spoil nothin of course...
1276213 Nope, not me. But that would be interesting to see.
Hey! It's me, Sablestripe!
I was just gonna say that you could TOTALLY use my drawing as the cover for your story...
but um, that is, only if you want to...
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Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter! I'm sitting on pins and needles
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Woot :D Sounds good!
and...
I just uploaded it. Please comment after reading, but don't hate me XD
I'm doing my very best to not hate you for this chapter
But really, excellent job. Only one grammar mistake this time that I remember seeing...
"I couldn't stand loosin' the both of you"
Just a reminder that the only things that are loose are baggy pants and your mom. Lose that extra O
Really nice chapter I actually didn´t expect them to fight.I am wondering if there will be more unexpected things or are they just going to reunite and walk in the sunset...
Anyways I can´t wait for the next chapter :D
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<3 thanks.
And I'm so sorry, I forgot to credit the cover image to you! I'll try to remember and put a little authors note on the next chapter linking back to your DA :)
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Unexpected things? ...BWahahahahaha you have no idea... although yea, it is pretty close to the ende, probs 3 or 4 more chapters :)
And thanks for commenting :D it means a lot to me :)
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Well... fuck.
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Thanks ;)
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Oh no... Not crying Twight! I'm sorry :'(
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XD
I must say, fantastic story!
But then you go and kill Rainbolt and YOU NO UPDATE?
The suspense is killing me!
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Sorry!! Update soon hopefully XD I totally forgot I left his at such a crucial point and thought I'd get some work done on my other stories...
>>malikvamp
dont be sorry to me XD
LOL XDDDD
YAY! It's such a good story
*cough*
I found a few others, too.For some odd reason, this chapter made me feel as if Dashie was Applejack's pet dog--not a bad thing, of course! Sort of the 'please love me because I love you' type of dog. Also; the pillow fort idea was brilliant.
Loving the story so far. Wondering if a new chapter is coming our way any time soon? The wait is killing me!
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It is, I'm sorry, school has been crazy, as well as life :( I'm tryin XD just need to put aside two hours or so :(
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Of course, I appreciate you have a 'real life' to deal with before any writing. It's never easy when things stack up on you.
Perhaps a quick blog post to let your followers know this would set a lot of minds to rest. Only a suggestion though
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Oh right O.o you can make blog posts on this site!!
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You can indeed, it's all on your profile page. Let the world know anything you want!
Aha! I thought you'd fallen off the face of the earth! Don't cliffhanger is like that again!
Nice chapter :3
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Thanks :) and although, I know, I got pretty side tracked, I plan on finishing the last chapter (maybe 2) within the next week or two! Thanks for sticking with me :)
And as far as a critique goes I'd say just try to tighten up the language a little more. The dialogue is really good but occasionally the narrative can sound pretentious in the way it seems to promote its own over emotional darkness. Just watch that xD and ofc I say that in the kindest way possible
Love the ending tho. I'd be just as confused xD