• Member Since 27th Oct, 2011
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When Gilda angrily departed from Ponyville, she was sure she'd lost her best friend forever. Leave it to Pinkie Pie to work her crazy magic and save the day.

[Story image by mast88.deviantart.com]

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Lovely story, I was a little disappointed with the original episode and how Dash simply gave up Gilda for her new friends, and this was a good conclusion.

33957 Thank you. With two kinda-dark stories in the works, I wanted to write something short and sweet. I had to remind myself of the short part a few times, else I'd have dragged it out. :twilightblush:

#3 · Nov 20th, 2011 · · ·

Gotta say that I think you should have focused more on Pinkie and Gilda's talk more then you did as I think that would have just have been awesome to see with how random Pinkie can be and gain some insight to how Gilda would really react to hearing some of it. Just a thought *shrugs*

36076 I've been thinking of posting a "lost files" kind of thing that would go into more detail about a few things, Pinkie's chat with Gilda included. For the most part, I wanted to leave that to the readers' imaginations.

The grammar is pretty good so is the pacing otherwise this fic should be on Equestria Daily:scootangel: i mean it has no dislikes at all so i say thats a pretty good sign.

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