• Member Since 23rd Jul, 2017
  • offline last seen May 14th

OnlyButtonMash


Button Mash is best pony

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Button Mash is very lucky to have such a good family and a good friend. He lives in Manehattan trying to live life to the fullest every day. But when button is forced to move away to Ponyville leaving his best friend behind, he has to learn how to befriend new ponies.

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This is my first story and my first big introduction to the fandom! Please give feedback that will help me improve my skills. I also am writing this story on an iPad so give me a break:rainbowkiss: :) I also will not be proofreading every word after each chapter because I'm too lazy so please point out any errors to me if you find any!!

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 15 )

Ah. Well, for your first chapter EVER, it was definitely a very strong start! You've already set up the premise, a potential main conflict, 2 characters with definable character traits, as well as some development. Only thing to really complain about is a couple minor capitalization errors here and there. Other than that, you're good!

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Thank you so much for commenting! Your comment means a whole lot since I see all of your comments on almost every other button Mash story. I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far!

JUANV #3 · Aug 7th, 2017 · · 1 ·

You already make me cry with whis prologue, excellent story, you got my Fav, and i will wait for the next chapter, thanks for the feels.
PS: sorry for the bad english, is not my native language

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Thanks so much for the feedback! I'm glad you are enjoying!

GA MY FEELS why did you kick me in the feels

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Comment posted by chasey1237 deleted March 25th

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My story and the story you mentioned have nothing to do with one another

DAMN DUDE, ya really hit me with the dinky thign dude. Say why did you stop writing?

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that was long ago and i was a idiot

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lmao i low key ditched the fandom for a minute haha. What we’re the comments about i completely i forgot? I’m not writing anymore because I’m really lazy and have no motivation, yet it saddens me to see that buttonbelle isn’t being written anymore.

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